
This concept is a new version of an older concept. View Old Version

This concept is a new version of an older concept. View Old Version
I prefer the first one, the font and the size of the dot work nicely together,whereas the second proposal is (at least for me) hard readable from a bit of a distance. The wing at the first proposal is very nice, however, I feel the top 2 feathers are touch to narrow together?
I prefer the first option which is clean and tidy. like it very much in fact.
Hate to keep doing this to ya, but I really like the direction of the previous design much better. This is by no means bad, but I just really liked the potential of the previous concept.
i like the bolder version of the text and the wings with it too...you should go for this one.
I prefer the first one. It seems more traditional whereas the second is a little more modern. Although, I took a look at the first concepts, and I feel like there was some promise there. Especially the first one.
On the wing, what if you took out the light blue drop shadow and keep it as a pure white cut out? See how that looks.
I like the first one, I'd change the wing though to something a little less thick.
Great work though
Kindly improve the shape of wing the are many good shapes of wings else the design and concept is good.
thanks hope you have voted me :)