Michael Minter

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By Michael Minter

   on Dec 11, 2009
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  • M Anonymous

    M Anonymous

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    2 colors.

    Posted on Dec 12, 2009 at 5:33 AM

    Quite nice. I would change the blue BG, to some pattern, and change the brown gradient in the Boost My Credit box.

  • Tiffany Gagnon

    Tiffany Gagnon

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    Blue Color, but so much better!

    Posted on Dec 12, 2009 at 7:53 AM

    I think this image is soooo much better. It's definitely a positive image with a positive message. (although I wish that chick was smiling)

    I would just make the dark blue color a little bright/lighter, or just a cheerier color. (I'm a recent college grad with tons of student loans and crappy credit, and I'm already "blue" about it. )_ Cheer me up with some light colors!

    I think the colors will make all the difference. Happy colors=happy people=happy people click on videos. : )

  • Ruben Oliveira

    Ruben Oliveira

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    Colors

    Posted on Dec 12, 2009 at 7:03 PM

    Hi, I'm not really sure about the colors and gradient.

    I would advise you to make the blue background a bit different.. make some showcase research and see what could fit better on that background.. maybe a more linear and brighter blue with less gradient.

    The downside of your design is definitely the brown form! I would remove the gradient and change the brown for sure.

    For last but not least, on this kind of page, I would make your image/video and form with rounded corners, give it a shot!

  • Jason Pant

    Jason Pant

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    Colors

    Posted on Dec 13, 2009 at 1:02 AM

    Liked the pattern you had before, it was just the blue didn't compliment it very well. Other than that it looks pretty good.

  • Hector Martins

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    The Blue gradient

    Posted on Dec 13, 2009 at 2:07 AM

    What if you use a white BG with dropshadows and hr or some lines to divide the heading, content, and video.

  • Swarat Ghosh

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    go with first one..

    Posted on Dec 14, 2009 at 3:35 AM

    as suggested by others can try with somekind of pattern in the "blue" bg

  • Nate Hamilton

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    Better

    Posted on Dec 14, 2009 at 8:20 AM

    The content area is much better but the colors are still not mixing well. The gradients for the header need to be more muted and less bold. Maybe think about making the blue bar, grey instead. You also need a new picture in a big way.

  • Ros 89

    Ros 89

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    fading blue

    Posted on Dec 13, 2009 at 12:01 AM

    look for a nice color pal. and apply one (http://es-es.colourlovers.com/palettes/top)

    it's a nice try, but i dont really like it al all.