Michael Minter

Score More Credit

By Michael Minter

   on Dec 10, 2009
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  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

    9919

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    2 Votes
    Colors, colors, colors

    Posted on Dec 11, 2009 at 7:07 AM

    The colors aren't working together. The blue feels very random and doesn't really go with your deep red/maroon you have chose. I think you also could use some detail work (Strokes, shadows, gradients, etc.).

  • Brian Heying

    Brian Heying

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

    101

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    Remove the blue

    Posted on Dec 11, 2009 at 8:24 AM

    Actually not to bad. Really dig the font used for "Score more Credit"

    Testimonials are a little long and could be shortened up as thumbnails.

    Add more to the white space above and below the middle paisly texture, even if it is almost entirely transparent.

  • Tiffany Gagnon

    Tiffany Gagnon

    Rank: 3 Superior

    1780

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    1 Vote
    The background

    Posted on Dec 11, 2009 at 9:17 AM

    Like people have said, the colors clash. I also think the textured background isn't working. I see that wallpaper pattern and thing old victorian mansion. Something I don't associate with people trying to get better credit scores. It seems a little off to have a guy in a nice suite, standing in from of a fancy living room wall, griping about his credit?
    The design is simple, I would just tweak the background. : )

    • Tiffany Gagnon
      Tiffany Gagnon commented:
      Posted: on Dec 11, 2009 at 9:18 AM

      I love spelling things wrong..corrections-- "and THINK old victorian.." "standing in FRONT of ..."

  • Marcus Stringer

    Marcus Stringer

    Rank: 4 Master

    147

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    Does the video automatically play?

    Posted on Dec 10, 2009 at 10:50 PM

    Because if I have to click on the play button... well...I just won't...

    Nice and to the point...

    • Michael Minter
      Michael Minter commented:
      Posted: on Dec 10, 2009 at 11:10 PM

      LOL! Client or no - There's no way I would do that to anybody.

  • daniel gräber

    daniel gräber

    Rank: 4 Master

    75

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    the welcome area

    Posted on Dec 11, 2009 at 5:02 AM

    nice structure of the site but the elements in the welcome area stand outside of the design ... the color of the input area don't match to the color of the pattern.

    The line in the footer has a very hard ending ... don't look good with smooth color blend.

  • Piyush Agarwal

    Piyush Agarwal

    Rank: 3 Superior

    261

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    1 Vote
    Quit the blue

    Posted on Dec 11, 2009 at 6:10 AM

    hii.... Simple and quite good a structure. But right now the main thing that is putting me off in this design is the use of blue color! It just doesn't seem to work with the heading color or the video background. Guess if you can do something about that...the design will look way better!

  • Brian Wangila

    Brian Wangila

    Rank: 4 Master

    383

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    match the color scheme of the banner

    Posted on Dec 11, 2009 at 1:58 PM

    The banner stands out too much, otherwise, good design

  • Codedude

    Codedude

    Rank: 2 Titan

    1418

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    the picture of the man isn't very welcoming

    Posted on Dec 11, 2009 at 11:03 AM

    the picture of the man isn't very welcoming...

    I would also add some information about the company. I wasn't exactly sure what the company was about when I first looked at it.