Miro

Serivaahtera web site, v. 2.5

By Miro

   on Dec 05, 2009
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  • Julio Rivera

    Julio Rivera

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
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    • Engagement: 3
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    looks better

    Posted on Dec 05, 2009 at 11:15 PM

    hey now we have a website that looks nice. I will go with number 1 all the way.

  • Adam Goodenough

    Adam Goodenough

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
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    Definitely number 1

    Posted on Dec 06, 2009 at 8:13 AM

    You want to increase the leading on the smaller type, though. It looks a little cramped.

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Dec 06, 2009 at 11:30 AM

      Thanks, Adam. I´ll take care that there is enough leading.

  • Robert Tipping

    Robert Tipping

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
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    if i had to pic between the two

    Posted on Dec 06, 2009 at 10:15 AM

    dwcjg2 would be my choice. I realize the images are space holding but in the end game the images will be very Important.

    I really like the colors and the set .

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Dec 06, 2009 at 11:33 AM

      Thank you, Robert! Yes the images are important, I try to get as good images as possible for this.

  • Kyle Scollin

    Kyle Scollin

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
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    • Engagement: 4
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    think about the actual content

    Posted on Dec 07, 2009 at 3:24 AM

    Both sites really look nice and well designed. I actually prefer how you've given the images a larger size in the second one, but I like the use of content in the top area of the first one. I think you need to figure out if you can actually fill all of that text with real text because right now it looks great, but when the real text comes in, it might mess up the layout.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

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    • Design: 3
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    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    I like the progress.

    Posted on Dec 07, 2009 at 8:12 AM

    The colors are looking much better. My only question is on the nav. Are you going to change where the nav is on the inside pages and take the logo off? If so, I would suggest you not do that. Other than that, I like where you are headed, good work!

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    nice design!! just couple of suggestion

    Posted on Dec 14, 2009 at 2:59 AM

    design1) provide some line height for sections like "table flags" and all..

    design2) "table flags" the captions need to be provided some bottom padding..