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It looks pretty solid already. I like that the characters look like steel beams. I think the I has too much weight. Try to make it the same weight as the other characters.
What's the story with the dots?
Some little things I would change:
1) The little angular accent left to the I: I would make it horizontal. 2) I could be mistaken, but is the lower half of the Z broader than the upper? If it is, then I would make it the same width as the upper half. 3) The lower section of the y has this peak. I would make it like in the Z's.
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Jakob Essbüchl commented:Looks much better now.
Maybe try to move the lower box of the y a bit lower and to the left, so that it's right under the upper left box. As it is now the y looks a bit short.
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what are those brown dots and why does the "y" have a sharp edge but nothing else does? maybe that should just be a rectangular box like at the top of the "y"
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This looks like a really nice logo, but I would consider doing more with the typography - perhaps add another feature to the Y that makes it feel more relevant to machines and materials.
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Shabbir Hussain commented:
They want to go to specific. According to the brief. So I updated a new logo. Thanks .
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the logo and type look great but the letter I, make the top bar accross straight rather than that weird angle, it looks like a mistake. keep it at 90 degrees.
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Also consider perhaps taking the bottom row of beads off the i.
My apologizes for the rushed photoshop job, hope you find some value to it.
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Shabbir Hussain commented:
Hey, I changed the I and updated the logo. Thanks for the comment.
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I like the simplicity of this logo. Try and bring the dots on the eye so that there is a gap between them and the "i" itself. Maybe you could also add an orange period to the end of "izzy" to tie the color in more. Good start!
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looks really strong
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There is nothing wrong here ...just a personal choice would be to sever the y at the bottom right leaving an angled mirror compliment to the stacked oranges. I always try to imagine a logo in practice I could see this on uniforms or hard hats or pick up truck decals -should serve you well.
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Hi, Jakob. Thanks for the comments. I worked with the 'I' but I am fond of the angular accent. And you were right of Z and Y. Change it. Check out the new file.