Shoshana Roszkowski

Business Card for Life Coach

By Shoshana Roszkowski

   on Dec 05, 2009
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Concept Reviews

  • Shabbir Hussain

    Shabbir Hussain

    Rank: 3 Superior

    458

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    Silhouettee.

    Posted on Dec 05, 2009 at 3:45 PM

    Well thought use of Colors. Green is indeed friendly for the target audience of life coach, etc. And the font gels well too. Have you had a look at it without the silhouette? Or maybe you could consider one with a blurred image of a woman in peace in the background.

  • Kyle Scollin

    Kyle Scollin

    Rank: 3 Superior

    147

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    Overall Concept

    Posted on Dec 07, 2009 at 3:30 AM

    I feel that this design is a bit too green. The colors are green, and photos of nature are used. I think that especially with words like "resources" the first thought isn't about a life coach. Also in the first card the silhouette of the lady seems like she's really small in the grass, not necessarily "tapping into her strength" But of these, I think the third one is the most professional looking.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Middle concept is a good start

    Posted on Dec 07, 2009 at 7:36 AM

    The middle concept is a good start but still unfinished. All of the concepts here seem ok, but look like they could be taken a step further. Try and add some shadows, strokes, gradients and such to make these designs look more polished.

  • Jan-Hinrich Fehlis

    Jan-Hinrich Fehlis

    Rank: 4 Master

    100

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    silhouette

    Posted on Dec 07, 2009 at 9:10 AM

    i like the second version most. But maybe would check on the typo (some capitals, hierarchy) and motive (stronger, more powerful).

  • Robert Tipping

    Robert Tipping

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 1
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    Id want narrower parameters

    Posted on Dec 05, 2009 at 2:30 PM

    Objective: to get woman calling the coach

    ruff call - if it where me I would be looking to narrow that down some. Your work is neat and tidy and the concept is ok but without a target demography

    "for efficient results: may as well be "fish and chips please"

    Figure out who they really want adjust message to hook .....as always" In My Opinion."