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Its bold and brash but im scared of the red
it triggers violence for me -where as the blue just comes of rugged/grunge/distressed.
Granted Im strange but its a little to Manson-esque.for me with the current colors.
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Robert Tipping commented:"completely blue or a less aggressive red?" the negative connotation i belief is sparked by the black grunge/brush overlay no telling where overlay-ed reds or silver may take you . Also your mat/background has a tremendous impact overall because of the trailing slithers and there relative opacity the mat color/gradient/image could totally open this up.
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Jakob Essbüchl commented:
I should remove the brush overlay then? Without any kind of fill I think it looks kind of 'understated', if you know what I mean.
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Robert Tipping commented:
I should remove the brush overlay then? no color it experiment with different brush colors.
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Seems to be missing some colors.
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I just don't think the design is in peace with the name here. For 5-fold I would suggest a logo with a visual puzzle.
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Jakob Essbüchl commented:
Yeah, that thought crossed my mind too. I thought of some better fitting concepts, but they didn't look as good as I had them imagined when I saw them on the screen.
I'll try to think of something better. Thanks for the feedback!
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I don't this this is a suitable style of design for a web design company.
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perhaps a great color to go with the 5 would be the teal family, maybe some bright and vivid turqoise.
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Jakob Essbüchl commented:
Thanks for the suggestion, I'll try it out but wouldn't it be a (nearly) monochromatic color sheme then? I tried to go for two colors.
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I like this concept quite a bit. It's very different but I think it works. The only thing that you are going to need to fight, is the idea that this is blood smeared against the wall. It could be mistaken for a horror logo. As long as you make sure that the rest of you page, business cards, letterhead don't look horror'esk I think you'll be fine.
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Jakob Essbüchl commented:
Thanks for the advice, I wanted to achieve a 'loose paintstrokes' kind of look, didn't notice that it looked like smeared blood until recently. I guess I would be better off with a different color.
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Nate Hamilton commented:Yeah, if you used a different color I think you would be fine.
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If this would be a horror movie site then it would be awesome. Maybe changing the colors would maybe it look more inviting and artistic. But right now the colors are "killing" me
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Jakob Essbüchl commented:
You're absolutely right, I'm already working on a new version. Thanks for the feedback!
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"I'm not bound to any norm!" but i think the logo is too "gorey" for me...
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You have a point there. Would you prefer it to be completely blue or a less aggressive red?