Brenda Valadez

Software Development company website.

By Brenda Valadez

   on Dec 04, 2009
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  • Robert Tipping

    Robert Tipping

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    "but I would be interested to know what do you think of the overall design accordingly to what we offer."

    I think it sits well

    I'm coming to it for solutions not eye candy ,the site has a professional restrained even attitude again I think good qualities for your demo graph.

    As you move into the site there is some clashy font things going on ?I am not familiar with site point so I don't know to what degree you control things like that for me any heading has to stand apart from body text that's what I mean by "clashy:

    • Brenda Valadez
      Brenda Valadez commented:
      Posted: on Dec 07, 2009 at 8:51 AM

      thank you for your comments, I really appreciate the help!

  • Newbird Design

    Newbird Design

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    the body width

    Posted on Dec 05, 2009 at 11:21 AM

    i see what you are going for here with the width of this content area but i think it makes i feel awkward i would extend it to the edges - overall good job...

    • Brenda Valadez
      Brenda Valadez commented:
      Posted: on Dec 07, 2009 at 8:52 AM

      awesome I will have our designer look into that. :) thank you for your review.

  • Andy E

    Andy E

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    A few adjustments

    Posted on Dec 05, 2009 at 2:41 PM

    The design looks good. I really like the News and Blog title boxes with the triangles to lead into the content. The color scheme works as well.

    I'd suggest a few adjustments: move the right column up so the search box aligns with the top of the picture or with the top of the navigation. Although white space is good, I feel that this use of white space could be improved. Also, I would scale down the height of the green below the main picture and perhaps consider removing the piece of the picture that is cut off in the bottom right quadrant of the green.

    I'd also consider increasing the line-height of the text. I feel like I have to move closer to the screen to read through everything.

    • Brenda Valadez
      Brenda Valadez commented:
      Posted: on Dec 07, 2009 at 8:52 AM

      thank you, your comments will be considered. :) since we are working on doing some redesign, this will help a lot!

  • Ian Tempest

    Ian Tempest

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    customer focus

    Posted on Dec 05, 2009 at 7:12 PM

    the site isnt bad, but what you do, ie software development, is not prominent enough.

    you mention the company name several times which is good. but i would bring front and center what you do, big and bold.

    • Brenda Valadez
      Brenda Valadez commented:
      Posted: on Dec 07, 2009 at 8:53 AM

      Thank you!!!!!!!! this is a very helpful comment right there... we were actually considering this, so having a comment from someone external helps a lot!

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Great start

    Posted on Dec 07, 2009 at 7:20 AM

    This is a great start. There are a few things that you could do to improve the look though.

    1. Align logo and navigation all the way to the left
    2. Bring the search bot up to align with the top of the box.
    3. Add some sort of stroke or shadow to the box to make it more interesting
    4. Your content could also use a little detail attention. It looks a little sparse and too spacious. Try putting some of the test on a light colored box to add some more hierarchy.

    Great start, keep the good work up!

    • Brenda Valadez
      Brenda Valadez commented:
      Posted: on Dec 07, 2009 at 8:54 AM

      thank you very much for your comments, this will help me and the team to have a better look on our website! thank you!