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Concept Description
- Website:
- i46.tinypic.com/15zf3wn.jpg
- Objective:
- to generate interest and sell more
- Target Market:
- no restrictions
- Categories:
- webdesign, graphic design
Web pages for my friend's small printing house where he prints flags, badges, stickers, etc. I am (still) designing this, now a more flag-like version. Please share your thoughts.
Full size at: http://i46.tinypic.com/15zf3wn.jpg
Previous Versions
Version 1
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Concept Reviews
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I think that you need to work in the upper banner. I think it's too simple and don't express well the idea of your friend's company.
I like the downer part with the boxes explaining and etc. But I don't like the pointing hand, it's strange...
The logo is really that? It just don't work fine with the rest of the page...
I want to see the second version that you're making...
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Hi! The top part of the website looks good when compared to the lower part of the website. It's nice and the frame around the photo (the pointed triangles) and their opacity really spice up the image. Nice work there. Here's something that you can try: 1. As the top and the bottom portions of the website are already dark (blue) in color, having a grey gradient is beating the purpose. So remove the grey gradient and make it simple white between the two yellow horizontal lines. 2. The columns really need a breather. If it's possible, try to make it only as a 3 column design and give about 30px free space between each columns. If you do have to stick to 4 columns, try reducing the width of the columns and make sure that you will be able to see the white space. 3. Let the heading remain blue, but change the text color to either black or the color with hex #666666. 4. Please do remove the pointing finger icon. It looks like that you picked up the clipart that was used back in the ages. Try something like a rounded cornered box and place it on the next line after the text ends.
Try this out and let us know.
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Miro commented:Thanks for your time, Devner. 1) I´ll fix the shadows as you said, good point there. 2) I have to check the content, it has been so long since we talked about the site last time with the client that I have already forgotten how many places (columns) are needed there. 3) I´ll try that 4) :-D It´s already gone.
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i just know this wouldn't fill my monitor so i would like to see a bit more info, content or images
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Miro commented:
I have to talk with my client about the content, this project has been going for so long that I have already forgotten how it was. But anyway, it can be fixed! Thanks!
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There is a lot of text on the landing page. Rather than having a paragraph for each item, maybe just have a image or icon.
The "hand" link should also have accompanying text for usability purposes.
Good start, but needs revision.
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Miro commented:
Thanks Luke for the review! What I remember, the photos were very poor quality, so there can be a problem showing them on this front page, but I´ll check that.
In the new version, that I am doing, the hand (or it is now an arrow) has an accompanying Read more -text.
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I like where you have brought this design too. I'd say make the blue a little less vibrant. A more muted or gray blue than what you have here. Other than that, I like it. Good job!
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Miro commented:
Thank you Nate! I´ll try how it looks with different shades of blues. However I can´t turn it too gray since it is supposed to remind of the colors of Finnish flag.
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I like the colors and the image but to much text for me some people don't like reading that much so an image can really help you know.
hmmm im hoping that is a test logo lol.
nice job!
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Miro commented:
Thank you for the review, Julio. The photos are (as I remember) quite poor quality so there might be a problem showing them on the front page, but I´ll check them again.
Haha, sorry, that is the real thing. I try just to ignore the logo, maybe after these pages are done we´ll fix that to a more modern look.
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Hi! I really love the blue! it is very bright and brings lots of life to the website. However I think you should try with different font types for the titles. And also maybe you can add some more images on the lower part (or make the upper one bigger... ) its not letting people know at first sight what the site is about. keep on the good work!
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Miro commented:
Thank you for the review, Brenda. Please take a look at my new version(s).
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If this site where about kites you would have to have a killer kite front row center I think you must have a nice big flag draped or angled here.
You are in luck because the net is writhe with patriotic symbolism I am sure one could create a huge study on the subject. I am very impressed with the colors and fonts you have made that sing. My Latin fails I look forward to the English version.
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1st it lack of the graphical elements and the big image is really near to the text in the above section the logo got nothing to do with the site , and the nav in the top is too small , but any way over all nice color scheme nice idea but still needs lots of work
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Miro commented:
Hi Amr, and thanks for the review. Please come and see my updated version, and a new one too.
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Yes the logo is really that, I´ve tried to forget that it looks like it looks. ;.D I am already working on the second version, thanks!