Vinicius Machado

Design for a Veggetarian and Green comunity

By Vinicius Machado

   on Dec 03, 2009
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  • Newbird Design

    Newbird Design

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    the plus isnt aparent enough

    Posted on Dec 03, 2009 at 7:26 PM

    i think the mark doesn't stand out really at all

  • Rajavel Ramasamy

    Rajavel Ramasamy

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    Need to be worked on...

    Posted on Dec 04, 2009 at 3:41 AM

    Not convincing me...

  • Karolis Versockas

    Karolis Versockas

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    The colors are radical. Try to use them more softly.

    Posted on Dec 04, 2009 at 3:49 PM

    Good movement forwards though! Keep it UP.

  • kate Broydo

    kate Broydo

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    Change the leaves

    Posted on Dec 04, 2009 at 5:21 PM

    I love the first 2, not so crazy about the bottom for some reason. Maybe for the first 2 if you can illustrate the leaves to feel more light and delicate that would definitely be great.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    MUCH BETTER!

    Posted on Dec 03, 2009 at 10:55 AM

    I like this version a ton better. I think both the logos work though I lean more towards the bottom logo. It's very different, subtle and trendy. Really well done!

    The top one could work as well but the leaf needs a lot of work before you could call it finished.

    • Vinicius Machado
      Vinicius Machado commented:
      Posted: on Dec 03, 2009 at 10:59 AM

      Thank you. I'll consider every word you say... The third logo I like it too, but the one I think that looks better is the middle one... I'll keep waiting for other reviews... Maybe they make me decide...

    • Vinicius Machado
      Vinicius Machado commented:
      Posted: on Dec 03, 2009 at 11:41 AM

      Hey, what do you suggest me to do with the leaves?

    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Dec 03, 2009 at 1:25 PM

      Make your leafs look more like leafs. The below link is some inspiration for you...

      http://georgiagreenteam.com/pics/GreenLeaf%28Logo_product%29.jpg

  • Daniel Suarez

    Daniel Suarez

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    type

    Posted on Dec 03, 2009 at 11:02 AM

    I like the mark that you have, but I think you need a typeface that goes better with the mark. Also the kerning is way off

    • Vinicius Machado
      Vinicius Machado commented:
      Posted: on Dec 03, 2009 at 11:45 AM

      What of the above do you like? I didn't understand of which you're talking about.

  • Robert Tipping

    Robert Tipping

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    3rd one for sure

    Posted on Dec 03, 2009 at 3:24 PM

    If it's possible to keep the white behind the mark(trade mark/logo)I think the 3rd one will work.

    The leaf could handle a little beef unless super subtle is what your after.

    Nice recovery tons better than the other one.