Vinicius Machado

Artt Mobile - Furniture design

By Vinicius Machado

   on Dec 03, 2009
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  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    I like the first one

    Posted on Dec 03, 2009 at 11:37 AM

    Have you tried making the lines on the image the same width as the lines on the text?

    • Vinicius Machado
      Vinicius Machado commented:
      Posted: on Dec 03, 2009 at 11:59 AM

      No I didn't think about it. Are you suggesting it?

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Dec 03, 2009 at 1:20 PM

      Yes I am, I think that might make it even better.

  • Adam Goodenough

    Adam Goodenough

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 3
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    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    What is the image supposed to represent?

    Posted on Dec 03, 2009 at 12:08 PM

    I think the third design has the most promise. Try removing the lower bar of the R to give it an open counter like the A.

  • Robert Tipping

    Robert Tipping

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    #4 for sure

    Posted on Dec 03, 2009 at 3:34 PM

    1&2 are good but to complex for branding irons.

    I confess there's something about branding wood that gives me a thrill.

    What kind of furniture do they build ?that could have a huge impact on your font/design .

    For what its worth your logo tells me they are upscale modern - hope that's the intent.

    • Vinicius Machado
      Vinicius Machado commented:
      Posted: on Dec 03, 2009 at 5:15 PM

      Yeah, they build modern kinds of furniture. They're very good in it... I really don't know if they'll mark it with fire on woods, it just came up to my mind.

  • Newbird Design

    Newbird Design

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    Love it

    Posted on Dec 03, 2009 at 7:24 PM

    the mark sits really well with the type face - Good job!

  • x x

    x x

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 3
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    0 Votes
    first logo

    Posted on Dec 04, 2009 at 4:26 AM

    stick with the first logo, lighten up the line weight by .5 points so that the logo's negative space can breath

    also do not mix the capital and lowercase letter forms. perhaps even find a better modern typeface, it has bad negative space, notice the outside curves of the letter forms (such as the O). the inside is rectanqular and the angels where the meet such as O, B, and E, seem off. and remove the tittle on the I.

  • kate Broydo

    kate Broydo

    Rank: 4 Master

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    all great

    Posted on Dec 04, 2009 at 5:25 PM

    Love the first one most definitely I think the typeface works well with the logo on top and both balance each other great.

  • Serina Patterson

    Serina Patterson

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    Love the first one

    Posted on Dec 07, 2009 at 11:37 AM

    The typeface works really well and the colours are perfect for the concept. I like the lowercase "i", and "e". The "r" seems odd to me, however.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Make object smaller

    Posted on Dec 03, 2009 at 10:53 AM

    I like the first logo. It looks modern, fresh and works well for your purposes I think. I would make the object smaller and center it on your text. Other than that, good work!

    • Vinicius Machado
      Vinicius Machado commented:
      Posted: on Dec 03, 2009 at 11:01 AM

      I really like the first one. It's my favorite. I like everything about it... The tricky is that I thought that it was centered, but it's really not! OMG!

      I'm gonna try to do what you said...

  • Daniel Suarez

    Daniel Suarez

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    • Design: 3
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    give it more meaning

    Posted on Dec 03, 2009 at 11:04 AM

    I think you have something great with the first design. It looks like de stij art movement. I would use those negative shapes to create a chair or something like that, and you would have an awsome logo

    • Vinicius Machado
      Vinicius Machado commented:
      Posted: on Dec 03, 2009 at 11:37 AM

      Thanks about it... I want to try more to show objects shapes with the design above...