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its a bit hard to read.. Expecting more...
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When I looked at this design, my first though was "Oh my God, my eyes hurts from looking at it". Well seriously now: Too much of green makes this really hard to read and also as I said before those colours are too agressive for the eyes. Logo is OK for me, but do not put it on green background .... try different colors, you will see, that it will make the difference. Best Luke
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Vinicius Machado commented:Thank you. I'm gonna try different colors on the background.
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Too much green, reading the text is very hard. but logo and layout looks fine. work on colors.
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Vinicius Machado commented:
Thanks a lot... I'm gonna try to make some color work there...
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I know verde means green so you are trying to pull that concept through, but I just think it's a bit overwhelming. You also have quite a few different greens together. You have really bright greens against some muted greens and I don't think it is working for you. The logo is also lacking a bit. I don't know the language so maybe I am missing some of the charm, but I don't understand what it is trying to portray.
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Understanding death by green is somewhat appropriate I think you have answered the question .......how much is to much.
Objective: Make something light and green Im afraid its lots heavy and monochrome. At least your body text and logo stroke calls for a contrast/compliment........as always IMO.
