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there is something at i like but some thing that i dont like and i cant pick what it is.
I really like the idea of the first concept with the wing over "i". I don't think the wing is visually there yet though. I am not quite sure what it is about the wing that I don't like. Maybe try making adding some gradients?
All your objectives are met.
Moving to stage II the font is rather "beer commercial".
Your mat - aka background color {#FAFAFA ff 3.5.5 xp pro)is not doing things justice . Ive noticed that a lot here am i missing something? .
Also IMO the stroke on the wing could be halved.
I like the idea you have going here. However, I'm not sure your font choice is the best. I'm not sure which one I would use, but I would not use your choice.
Also, the colors don't really remind me of a aviation group. Right now the colors remind me of a kids store. Maybe you could a silver color for the wing.
I really like the first concept you have but I agree with a few of the others. It would look really great if the wing had a subtle gradient instead of just a flat color.
You may want to try different types of wings also some with more jagged edges etc. just to try different looks.
wing works well over the i but not over the "blue." I also think the wing could use some more dimension. or go one solid color. I don't think the stroked wing works well.
hm not so sure about the wing it looks more like a quill
Use it as first version, instead the i dot, and remove that stroke, make blue and wing same color, and try darker ones and soft ones too, maybe gradient would help. Experiment little bit more.
I think that the font you choose isn't good for the porpouse. I do think it should kinda same style, but not this one.
I just don't know where you're gonna put this. In cards, stickers, where?
Are you stuck with using that shade of blue? If you can, make it a darker blue. Medium or dark blue gives a feeling of security and professionalism.
Give "Blue" a soft linear gradient and the wing a radial gradient centered from the tip closest to the "i". Also, remove the stroke from the wing.
The wing over the "i" is great -- the shape is a bit off. I agree that using gradients would enhance the effect.
pretty cool i like the type face you chose
Make the B taller than the L, put a tittle on the eye, and the type treatment is great. simple and effective. It looks like a solid unit with the logo above the B rather than in the middle of the word as the first one is. great job.
wing is not showing exactly what is related ..... i thing it can be more meaning full with showing more attractive wing.
I love the font, but just don't think it is right for this company's image. It is a bit too casual with a bit too much character of its own - I.E. the 'g' and 'i' draw attention to themselves a bit more than it should. I like the colors and the underlying concept. But, I would try different wing shapes. The current wing feels more like a quill or flame and is a bit to cartoon-like with the combination of simple shape and thick stroke. Are there other shapes that would balance with the words better? Both versions here feel lopsided. Is there a wing shape that subtly references an airplane wing? Even if it is based on a bird's wing, it can at least be in shape that looks less like it is sticking out of the top of robin hoods cap and more like it is soaring in the sky like a plane?
Why don't you try using stronger colors and play around with different fonts. You should also consider flipping the wing horizontally.. I think that will make it a better.
I'm just not liking it. I don't think the wing is good, perhaps the font is bad. I dunno I don't like it.
Hmm I like the whole concept Just I feel that U must use alternate blue color. Though logo is fine :)