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I think that if the sentence "reading through proverbs" was smaller, it should look great.

Everything looks so much big. But I like it instead (the tipography is doing great for the theme).

This page has some unique qualities, but the main text font (under Proverbs) is difficult to read. This font is best suited for titles. I'd like to see a font with more kerning for the main text to make it easier to read. Your site visitors will be much happier.

I would make the heading smaller - its a bit much! And change the "daily chapter" subheading to the same font as the menu headings so there is some flow. May be even get rid of the blue background or lighten it alot! The yellow line doesn't really sit well . The whole thing looks like the page is cut in half - try make the page look like a "whole page". Otherwise it is a good start - well done!

I really like the general look and feel of this layout. The nav is beautiful and use of type is nice for proverb area. Your navigation, main text and footer all have a clean and refined feel.

The header definitely needs some work though. The font is odd, words are hard to read and the colors don't work with the rest of the design. Maybe it's the book leading the eye off the page? In conjunction with the fact that your words are tucked behind it?

i think there is too much gray in this one maybe "reading through proverbs" could be orange?

over all it looks cool

You should add some color to different action items on your page. Such as the "Read More" & "Share Your Thoughts".

I think improving some of these details will help improve the overall feel of the site.

the readability is not there because of that for "recent entry" section

i also didnt like the font you have used "words to the wise"

Making a website more impressive is how selecting the appropriate letter to the character of the website. Usually a maximum of 3 different typography, more than that will cause the eye will be disturbed/annoying and also the fonts size too.

I think this concept needs more colors, even though you try to be neutral with them, I think this is now too neutral. Everything else looks good.

The logo looks like you didn´t spend too much time with it ;-) but it´s not totally bad I must say.

there is something about this at is not hitting me right.

maybe its the nav been at the bottom or the color are to washup or some dont know.