Rob Modzelewski

Personal Logo for Freelance Design Services

By Rob Modzelewski

   on Nov 29, 2009
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  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    ummm

    Posted on Nov 30, 2009 at 4:32 PM

    I think it's ok as a start...

    I would suggest making the logo integrate with the wording so have the BOB and MOD cross over both 'O's like a noughts and crosses grid, and then the D of MOD being the start of Design.

    Also drop the Design off the tagline otherwise it will read like this: bob mod design design & illustration.

    Good luck!

  • Miro

    Miro

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    style

    Posted on Dec 01, 2009 at 10:16 PM

    It is quite generic, I don´t think it is good enough for you. You are offering design services, so I think it should really look like high design logo. Keep on experimenting...

  • Vinicius Machado

    Vinicius Machado

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    I don't like it

    Posted on Dec 02, 2009 at 8:55 PM

    I think it's too simple. Too simple at all. I think it's difficult to understand BOB and MOD there... And for a design + illusration is quite simple at all... Try something less serious... I don't think that this tipography helps your idea...

  • Swarat Ghosh

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    nice attempt bob

    Posted on Nov 29, 2009 at 11:50 PM

    love the colors and concept g8 start i guess..i love the first one... hope that u will come up with more concept

    • yaniv riezman
      yaniv riezman commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2009 at 6:26 AM

      the design + illustration same font , i will lose the fading and keep it simple colors are great maybe the design + illustration black color or #287ed1

  • yaniv riezman

    yaniv riezman

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    fonts

    Posted on Nov 30, 2009 at 6:33 AM

    the design + illustration same font , i will lose the fading and keep it simple colors are great maybe the design + illustration black color or #287ed1

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Nice and simple

    Posted on Nov 30, 2009 at 9:01 AM

    Nice and simple design. I like the colors and the over all layout. The faded out BD OR BO isn't going to show in most cases, so I would say just leave it out.

  • Newbird Design

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    new idea..

    Posted on Nov 30, 2009 at 9:47 AM

    i don't like the bob, mod it will cause you to have weird placement and alignment issues because it adds so much extra height to the logo.

    • Rob Modzelewski
      Rob Modzelewski commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2009 at 10:22 AM

      Newbird, I was thinking of keeping the "bob, mod" for logo when there is room and it seems appropriate (on my business card for example), but dropping it when space requires that I do so. My concern with this strategy is that without "Bob, Mod" my persona becomes just "BM Design." That's fine, but I think "Bob Mod" is such a catchy name, that, if possible, I should utilize it.

    • Newbird Design
      Newbird Design commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2009 at 5:50 PM

      also BM can be mistaken as Bowel Movement ;)

    • Rob Modzelewski
      Rob Modzelewski commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2009 at 11:03 PM

      I doubt it. GM is never confused with "Gastrointestinal Movement."