Riady Santoso

Dzign.Art Mock Up Logo

By Riady Santoso

   on Nov 28, 2009
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  • Miro

    Miro

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    dzign 6

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 10:21 PM

    I like most version 6. And a suggestion: http://i50.tinypic.com/f71qf.jpg

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 28, 2009 at 10:26 PM

      Very nice suggestion - and it's great you provide the sample as well - thanks Miro

  • Alex Fuller

    Alex Fuller

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    Good job!

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 10:15 PM

    I like the colors Hmm As for a Favorite Its really hard to tell I like Design #2, 6, and 4.

    There isn't much I could tell you to improve, so good job!

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

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    5 is nice!!

    Posted on Nov 29, 2009 at 3:39 AM

    nothing to change

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    colours

    Posted on Nov 29, 2009 at 1:23 PM

    are too bland...

    no. 6 is the best, but not really there yet...

    i just think the logo, needs a little more work, maybe try sketching out some more ideas

    keep going...and good luck!

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2009 at 4:46 AM

      thanks Aaran - definitely I will do mor experiment on this logo

  • Robert Tipping

    Robert Tipping

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    Preferred last batch

    Posted on Nov 29, 2009 at 1:53 PM

    Don't like these at all they say"Power tools"or"motor accessories"

    Your earlier efforts where more artistic even hinting at Inuit art much more interesting. as always IMO.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2009 at 4:46 AM

      thanks Robert - I will keep finding my direction to get it right

  • Karolis Versockas

    Karolis Versockas

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    Try to play with colors.

    Posted on Nov 29, 2009 at 3:49 PM

    I like Dzign 5,

    But maybe you can try evolve from those letters

    Dzign Art

    I mean you have D and A in left and try to add rest of word. Using logo as firs capital letters.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2009 at 4:47 AM

      sure Karolis - evolution is always part of the logo creation - thanks a lot - I will play around with your suggestion

  • Newbird Design

    Newbird Design

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    ok

    Posted on Nov 29, 2009 at 7:35 PM

    i like dzign 6 the best

    i like that it is capitalized because it keeps the slogan from feeling forced

    i still think it needs some work i think you should use a bold front like the one you use in dzign 6 but one that is less playful. I don't see this font mixing well with your logo mark

    one more thing i would like to see it without the hollow "."

    last thing how does it look with a non rounded rectangle hollowing out the mark characters?

    good progression on this though, you really are moving towards a well designed final concept.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2009 at 4:48 AM

      thanks Newbird - I will concentrate on 1 design and evolve it from that point - thanks a lot for the feedback

  • Gia Josie

    Gia Josie

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    pick one..

    Posted on Nov 30, 2009 at 5:04 AM

    You must pick one from many your logo concept, because your logo overall the same shape, the different is only the typography. If i choose from many design, i'll pick number 6 for the typo and for the logo is number 1.

    The reason cause your tag line is "when design meets art so, the logo must represented the tag line.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Dec 04, 2009 at 2:33 AM

      at this state, I'm trying to match the logo with the typographic style, but seems like I have to step back abi tmore to rethink the logo shape again. Having the shape of D & A meet each other is my concept of the logo - but it's not that obvious isn't it? I'll refine the logo and post them as soon I'm done - thanks Gia

  • Nate Hamilton

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    Too much going on

    Posted on Nov 30, 2009 at 8:49 AM

    I think you need to simplify these logos in a big way. There are just too many treatments and lines going on.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Dec 04, 2009 at 2:34 AM

      I see, the correlation between the logo, typo and tag line are not match? I will be refining this then - thanks Nate

  • Lisa Danielson

    Lisa Danielson

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    great!

    Posted on Dec 01, 2009 at 9:13 PM

    I like design 6. I really like the visual you developed for this one and I think the type works well. In Design 1, you can't see the tagline that well, since it's a little lighter. I don't think the tagline needs to be in all caps either. I think it works well in lowercase. in Design 6, you can see the brand name, as well as the tagline which is good. The colors work well together and the typeface for DZIGN is very strong. I'm not sure what the visual is or what it stands for, but overall I think this is a very strong logo.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Dec 04, 2009 at 2:35 AM

      thanks lot Lisa - but seems like I 'm still needing to refine the logo a bit more - but, thanks for the feedback and support

  • ravi thej

    ravi thej

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    dzign 6 is good

    Posted on Dec 02, 2009 at 1:45 AM

    try playing with the tag line too,

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Dec 04, 2009 at 2:30 AM

      thanks Ravi - yes, I will play with the tag line too

  • Vinicius Machado

    Vinicius Machado

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    Let me think..

    Posted on Dec 02, 2009 at 8:58 PM

    I agree that the dzing 6 is the best. But I think that the colors and the idea is not good enought. This logo reminds me of a strange medicine pill...

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Dec 04, 2009 at 2:31 AM

      hahahahaha - I see, I will make it a lot more strange so it won't look like a strange pill anymore hahahaha - thanks for the feedback - I will be back to my meditation then