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Hi Riady,
I like it.
The box below 'transforming... into Godly leaders..." seems drab. Not sure what to do about that. I'm not a huge fan of light grey, though. It reminds me of older websites.
I LOVE the picture along the top and on the left side. I almost wish I could see the top of the left picture - what does the ceiling of the church look like? I bet it's beautiful.
The top picture (with the outside of the church) feels a little dark on the right side. Is that the way the picture was taken or is it darkened intentionally?
The word "godless" isn't capitalized, but if it is for the sake of a header, is "people" supposed to be too?
I really like the 1/2 rounded corner 1/2 square corner thing going on.
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Shane Kingery commented:well, it looks like a beautiful building with the stone and I'm wondering if it would make the header brighter by only darkening the portion under the logo (or dark from the left most portion of the header just to the right of the logo). That way, the rest of the image is more visible...
I agree with Swarat that the featured link section doesn't pop as much as I hope it to. Maybe the background could be white and you could delineate that section with color/subtle border or something like that. The rest of the page looks beautiful, rich, inspiring, then the grey portion is just there. :oI
Hope you are well.
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Shane Kingery commented:
well, it looks like a beautiful building with the stone and I'm wondering if it would make the header brighter by only darkening the portion under the logo (or dark from the left most portion of the header just to the right of the logo). That way, the rest of the image is more visible...
I agree with Swarat that the featured link section doesn't pop as much as I hope it to. Maybe the background could be white and you could delineate that section with color/subtle border or something like that. The rest of the page looks beautiful, rich, inspiring, then the grey portion is just there. :oI
Hope you are well.
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Shane Kingery commented:
well, it looks like a beautiful building with the stone and I'm wondering if it would make the header brighter by only darkening the portion under the logo (or dark from the left most portion of the header just to the right of the logo). That way, the rest of the image is more visible...
I agree with Swarat that the featured link section doesn't pop as much as I hope it to. Maybe the background could be white and you could delineate that section with color/subtle border or something like that. The rest of the page looks beautiful, rich, inspiring, then the grey portion is just there. :oI
Hope you are well.
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The links are not working for the original site and your screen shots a really small IMO ant chance of a re up.
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Riady Santoso commented:
I checked the original link - it's working, and I have resized the image up
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Robert Tipping commented:My isp is rogers In Canada there is something slightly Orwellian about this bunch. Back to your site I would do a good scan of the colors in left photo and then keep the orange's consistent from there. The overall design has captured some spiritual content not easy to do with out calling George Lucas I would say well done thanx for the re up.
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Riady Santoso commented:
hi Robert, thanks for introducing me to Orwellian and Rogers :)
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Robert Tipping commented:
"hi Robert, thanks for introducing me to Orwellian and Rogers :)" Of the 2 I believe Rogers to be the more dangerous............
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Hello,
I like your design, espacially on white but :
- Try to make breath your top menu by remove some links or space items or put links in other block
- Don't forget to do a footer. MAybe the solution is here : put secondary links in footer.
Bye
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Riady Santoso commented:
I see your point on the navigation menu - I'll try to re-work on the sitemap to combine some of the relevant / similar contents to make the links number reduced.
Thanks also for the footer idea - that's a good idea
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Nice site. Clean. I don't like the left side bar much. Maybe move the Latest News up above the Blog entry?
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Riady Santoso commented:
hi Joshua,
thanks for the feedback - the reason for the blog at the top section as this is the main focus for the self updated section - but I'll keep the idea of mving blog in my mind
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pretty solid design not too much i would change about this one. you might want to try a graphical element in the background.
i like the gray better.
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Riady Santoso commented:
Thanks Newbird - yup, I will start playing with graphical elements, probably as background or as icons
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also not liking the tagline with black bg in the background..rest is cool
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Riady Santoso commented:
thanks Swarat - will there be any recommendation to improve them?
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The design seems a bit confined. I like the colors you chose but would try and free up this design a bit.
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Riady Santoso commented:
thanks Nate - yes, I will play around with the design a bit more
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First off, let me compliment you on your great work, you have a nice design here.
I think that maybe there could be 1 improvement, and that is the curved edges. They don't seem to work when the design has a dark bg. I think that they are just a bit too curved. Maybe a slightly more gentle curve might do the trick.
Other than that, keep up the good work! :-)
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Riady Santoso commented:
thanks William, I might be just concentrate on working on the white background one as it wil look a lot cleaner
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thanks for the feedback Shane, the picture is darkened intentionally to put the focus on the logo but feel free to provide feedback whether there would be any better way to to so.
You are right, just a typo for the word People - I'll fix them soon
thanks heap