
This concept is a new version of an older concept. View Old Version

This concept is a new version of an older concept. View Old Version
I like the shape of slanted bulding, and windows make the logo more obvious as building, and of course, combined with maze underneath it to empgasize the challenge - well done
Overall I love this logo!
I find the windows a little unnecessary - you've done such a good job communicating the city vs maze visual as it is.
Have you tried using a chunkier typeface? Might read a little smoother at the smaller size if you lose the nubs that appear on the 'i' and 'L's. Just a suggestions.
If you are going to incorporate color, I would pick one word of emphasis (such as 'urban') and make it the only bold colored object.
Great design - love this piece!
Clayton, how about like this: http://i49.tinypic.com/24brdbr.jpg
Thanks, but then it wouldn't be my design and not the concept I was going for.
Yes that might be true. It was just so much easier for me to draw a picture than trying to explain the same thing with words.
g8 job dude...
Keep:
Buildings Geometric quality of text
Change:
Add Color (the word "urban is a good candidate) Get rid of windows (unnecessary and distracting)
I love Miro's idea for this :)
I love how it's a city upright using a solid shape and on the bottom it looks like an upside-down city and it also turns into outlines. Very clever use of opposites and visually appealing!
About the current version:
Overall I love the idea - it's very smart :)
I think there are just too many outlines and this creates visual clutter and confusion, especially since these outlines are similar in width to the font.
I don't think the font is appropriate here because it reminds me of the USSR rather than "urban". Try other sans-serif fonts.
The sharp angle is unpleasant and it doesn't help me identify it as a skyline.
Now that you have simplified this quite a bit, I think it is working more as a logo now. I think I could even say your finished here. Great work!
i agree, good improvement on the previous. Thinking of adding any colour?