Riady Santoso

Dzign.Art Mock Up Logo

By Riady Santoso

   on Nov 26, 2009
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  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    Hi Raidy,

    I like design 1, 2 and 3.

    I like one because that is the one that drew me in the most and is interesting. I like how the A meets the dot.

    Design two looks neat and clean, as well as, forms an interesting shape overall.

    I like dezign 3 a lot. I like how the orange dot relates to the pointing A below it and it also serves as completing the letter A. It is a meeting that seems fitting to your second line of "when design meets art". Although, I am wondering what other versions of #3 would look like if you made the lighter greys you have a darker grey (as in one.)

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 28, 2009 at 4:26 AM

      thanks a lot Amy - I will try to play with dzign 3 based on your opinion

  • Shabbir Hussain

    Shabbir Hussain

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    Font Size.

    Posted on Nov 27, 2009 at 3:49 PM

    I like Dzign 4. You can increase the font there.

  • Robert Tipping

    Robert Tipping

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    #3

    Posted on Nov 27, 2009 at 7:29 PM

    Number 3 is interesting .

    Fact is you have 2 logo's though - your dzignart and tag line could probably hold up on there own.

    The motif with red dot (also #3) would cut it on its own. Well done

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 28, 2009 at 4:25 AM

      thanks - yes, I'd like to have the symbol that can stands by itself, as well as the full logo - just trying to get myself on the right direction. I really appreciate everyone's opinions here

  • William Hand

    William Hand

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    Like No 3

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 12:16 PM

    I think it is the best. Reading through others comments, I can see that there is a + between the D and A on 5 but I think it takes a good eye to see the actual D and A shapes. Maybe something like 3 with a slight separation between the D and A.

    Great ideas though.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 28, 2009 at 3:37 PM

      thanks William, yes there is + in between D & A for dzign 5, I might just need to make it more obvious lol. I'll keep playing with the logo and report a refined concept soon

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 28, 2009 at 6:57 PM

      Thanks Windy, I will definitely concentrate on this logo and will repost as soon as the refined concepts are done

    • William Hand
      William Hand commented:
      Posted: on Nov 28, 2009 at 6:59 PM

      Nice. I will look forward to seeing what you finally come up with. Hope the feedback helped. :-)

  • Windy May

    Windy May

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    Simplicity of No. 5 is a winner...

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 6:45 PM

    No. 5 is definitely my preference - hands down. The simplicity and strength works exceptionally well for a logo dev.

    The fact that the 'D' and the 'A' are not obvious to the untrained eye is not a bad thing - it registers on a subconscious level and therefore carries more weight as far as effectiveness.

    I would suggest extending your tag line text to the full length of the line above - the slightly shorter tag line is visually distracting.

    Overall, well done. Really think you're off to a good start and look forward to seeing where this goes!

    (Apologies for the double post - just figuring this out!)

  • Miro

    Miro

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    dzign 5

    Posted on Nov 27, 2009 at 12:15 AM

    I am not so keen on the first three, the fourth one is getting there and the last one is the best. I would keep on experimenting with that one.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 27, 2009 at 12:59 AM

      thanks for the feedback Miro - I will concentrate on fourth and fifth then

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

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    i too go with the last one

    Posted on Nov 27, 2009 at 12:46 AM

    but need more options for that...:)

  • Sufian Hassan

    Sufian Hassan

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    Review

    Posted on Nov 27, 2009 at 1:19 AM

    Is it me or is the last one not at all realted to the "D" and "E"?

    4th design seems ok but the text within the logo seems a bit small.

    I like the concept of design 2 but the ".ART" stands to the right.

    Designs 1 and 3 are the ones which I do not like.

    As Swarat said their needs to be more options, their seems to be at least one down sides with all of them.

    • Sufian Hassan
      Sufian Hassan commented:
      Posted: on Nov 27, 2009 at 1:20 AM

      Mistake "realted to the "D" and "E"?" It was (the "D" and "A")

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 27, 2009 at 4:56 AM

      With option no 5, it's actually D separated by + and A is rotated , similar concept with no 4, except the distanced is closed. But, yes - I'll be working more on the option that seems to be working - thansk for the feedback Suffian

  • marc

    marc

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    keep going

    Posted on Nov 27, 2009 at 11:05 AM

    I like the symbol in design 3, think that could work.

    And design 5 is interesting, I like the idea, but it's not quite right. Keep playing with that, and the text in 3 as I think the symbol really works.

  • Newbird Design

    Newbird Design

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    the font

    Posted on Nov 27, 2009 at 1:03 PM

    i like the last one the most, but i dont like the font's "g" and how it pushes the slogan down it feels forced.