Gia Josie

Logo Etnomark

By Gia Josie

   on Nov 26, 2009
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  • Pim Hogeweg

    Pim Hogeweg

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    remove the gradient

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 8:36 AM

    Very neat logo, I like the styling. Though I would make it a little more simple. So get rid of the gradient and just fill the rounded square with solid blue and the "," just solid white.

    Curious about the new redesign :-p...

  • Sufian Hassan

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    Interesting

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 1:47 AM

    Interesting Idea but the background to me feels a bit weird first look at the logo I liked it, but when I started to look at it in more detail it comes to notice that it seems like the image of the "," is good but the background tells a different story, richness. If I can find an example I will post it as a comment.

  • Miro

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    The sign

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 9:07 AM

    I can not explain this so I made a picture, how about doing it like this: http://i50.tinypic.com/339k6ww.jpg

    • marc
      marc commented:
      Posted: on Nov 27, 2009 at 6:36 AM

      much better alignment!

  • Rebeca Zuniga

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    I would try with other colors

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 7:49 PM

    I visualize the colors you used more for technology, business or marketing in general. The "Etnography" aspect seems to me like a variety of different tones.. (hot colors/neutral maybe?) because it needs to be distinguished from the others. I loved the "quote" idea. Congratulations :)

  • Newbird Design

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    over all looks good

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 7:51 PM

    but i think i have seen this so many times with the quotations and i don't know if they really suit what they do.

  • Shabbir Hussain

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    Background.

    Posted on Nov 27, 2009 at 3:51 PM

    Blue is overly used in Marketing and communications. Can you try with different colors

  • William Hand

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    The gradient

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 5:02 PM

    From most of the posts, I can see that the gradient is disliked. Why don't you try making the gradient a bit less harsh by using a curve.

    Eg, apply a layer on top the same but slightly faded and then cut out a smooth curve using an oval and then u have a nice gradient.

    Just a thought. Like the principle though. Quite iphoney

    • Windy May
      Windy May commented:
      Posted: on Nov 28, 2009 at 7:01 PM

      Gradient re: like the iPhone apps style? - might be a little too trendy (not as timeless)...

      Just a thought.

    • William Hand
      William Hand commented:
      Posted: on Nov 28, 2009 at 7:06 PM

      Ok, cool. Sure whatever you do will turn out well. Look forward to seeing what you finally come up with.

  • Kevin Tomasic

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    Keep the font, change the square

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 5:13 PM

    Sorry for being blunt but I think you need to start from scratch with the blue square. I agree with shabbir ... blue IS overused in that industry (so is orange). Try a different color, radial gradient and rotate the square 30 - 45 degrees.

  • Bob Modzelewski

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    Overall, this is a very friendly logo. The rounded quality of the typeface indicates a company that is human-centered and approachable. Ditto for the lowercase letters in the second line. The icon seems a bit off though. The color and simple-quality are great, but I think the gradient is not terribly appropriate. Also, the negative space created by the quotation marks is awkward. I do not recommend going more symmetrical (too static), but definitely address the negative space.

  • Nurit Avni

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    More intent

    Posted on Nov 29, 2009 at 9:58 PM

    It looks like a start for a good logo.

    I do think it needs to be pushed further - the placement in the rounded square with the gradient looks more default than intentional to me.

    I think it stays at the initial stage of "quotation marks + Etnomark" and it needs something extra to make it stand out. One example of where quotation marks are used cleverly can be found here : http://creattica.com/logos/talkmore/2320

    I like that the marks start to look like two people facing each other - maybe this can be pushed further? Just an idea.

    I think you have a great subject matter, dealing with anthropology and different cultures and you need to have more fun with it :)

  • Nate Hamilton

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    Take the quotes outside of the box

    Posted on Nov 30, 2009 at 7:56 AM

    Leave the quotes outside of the box. Make the quotes the blue color. I like the text you used for ETNOMARK. I think the subheading gets a little lost but still doesn't look bad.

  • Juraj Hríb

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    maybe try to flip the background vertically?

    Posted on Dec 02, 2009 at 5:46 PM

    I agree with Sufian Hassan, my feeling about the logo was like the same.

  • Ali Karim Karim

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    Gradient

    Posted on Dec 02, 2009 at 5:53 PM

    Its a great design only i would change the blue gradient, just don't look right, also you could add a small 'quotation marks' on either side of the writing, might look good but not sure, you should create a few variations and post it for us to review.

    nice design.

  • Vinicius Machado

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    Doing well

    Posted on Dec 03, 2009 at 9:26 AM

    I like the typography you used, but I think that the logo is a little bit lost. I think that the gradient isn't good enough... Maybe if the quotes were out of the square and colored in blue (with gradient) should be good...

  • marc

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    Bin the gradient

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 4:38 AM

    The dark gradient you have over the top, I would personally get rid of that - why is there? Also don't like the way the "speech marks" (im assuming thats what they are?) line up.

    But the idea isn't a bad one.

  • Swarat Ghosh

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    nice try..!!

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 4:59 AM

    i too feel its better to remove the dark shadow from top..

    • gia josie
      gia josie commented:
      Posted: on Nov 26, 2009 at 5:05 AM

      Okay Ghosh, i'll remove that dark, thanks Ghosh :)