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  • Jesus H. Christ

    Jesus H. Christ

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 5
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    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
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    Friggin' awesome!

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 7:44 PM

    Love it :D

    Fix the kerning in ULTIMATE though. The T and I are melted together.

  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Yes, it´s good

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 10:04 PM

    Now you have the challenge also in it. Looks very good! Adding the windows Jesus mentioned might do it even better though.

  • Robert Tipping

    Robert Tipping

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
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    • Engagement: 3
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    To much stuff

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 10:12 PM

    Print this logo take a pair of scissors an cut neatly across the bottom line above the word ultimate.

    Know slide the grouped 3 words up till just enough of the skyline caps the word.

    Ta da there it is simple and pertinent.

    I don't like the maze and you don't need it just the skyline above ultimate will be awesome.

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
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    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    makeit simple buddy

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 10:22 PM

    i too feel u can remove the maze and just have the building outline..

  • Leandro Loureiro

    Leandro Loureiro

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    • Design: 3
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    • Engagement: 3
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    Improved, but ...

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 11:38 PM

    Improved, but still think in the case of use in small size, you will not have a good read. I also think you should use another font, such as experience.

  • Gia Josie

    Gia Josie

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Nice..

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 1:14 AM

    good work! maybe give some windows or something for the building.

  • marc

    marc

    Rank: 4 Master

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    windows

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 4:42 AM

    Interesting. Loving the idea. As everyone else has said, adding some windows might help (or make it more obvious it's a skyline). There's something not quite sitting right with me on the skyline/maze - don't get me wrong I like it, but I can't work out whether it's too simple, or not simple enough.

    hmm...

  • Riady Santoso

    Riady Santoso

    Rank: 3 Superior

    453

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    I like it

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 9:33 PM

    I do like the concept of combining cistiscape and maze - I think it goes quite well together. And the typo matches the design

  • William Hand

    William Hand

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes
    Some windows

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 5:48 AM

    I think it could be a bit clearer if you had some windows, that way people know it is a urban skyline.