Riady Santoso

Dzign.Art Mock Up Logo

By Riady Santoso

   on Nov 25, 2009
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  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

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    nice concept

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 1:21 PM

    but need to play around with colors and typo..

  • Robert Tipping

    Robert Tipping

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    Number 3

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 3:44 PM

    Im not sure if the color would always fly but i like Number 3 the best. No. 4 maybe interesting without the words.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 25, 2009 at 11:59 PM

      Thanks Robert - I will compile the suggestion and try to revise the logo

  • Jesus H. Christ

    Jesus H. Christ

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    Number 3

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 4:21 PM

    Try lines of different width.

    Try DZIGN ART in all-caps, or all lower-case.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 25, 2009 at 11:59 PM

      Thanks for the feedback - I'll play with the recommendation

  • Clayton Borah

    Clayton Borah

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    looks a little dated

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 4:54 PM

    The design looks a little dated. It seems kind of trendy and may already be behind the trend. Logo design should try to be as timeless as possible.

  • Matthew J

    Matthew J

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    See below ...

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 6:34 PM

    I like #1, #3 I would like to see #1 colors on #3.

    4 is really hard to read.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 25, 2009 at 11:58 PM

      thaks Matthew - I'll try to play around with the colour and re-post it

  • Newbird Design

    Newbird Design

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    seen it before

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 7:52 PM

    i have seen this style of logo a few times around and at this point its starting to lose its taste.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 25, 2009 at 11:54 PM

      Would you kindly direct me to a good reference of trendy logo design?

  • Gia Josie

    Gia Josie

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    dzign 3

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 1:07 AM

    Is the color the same like your character (the pink and the black 90%)? Give some tag line for your logo, like; we think, we sketch, we create or else. Nice try :)

  • Manuel Piccoli

    Manuel Piccoli

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    Reflection

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 3:07 PM

    mmm, the first it's trivial.....I like the second one..... While the third could be improved by clearing the "d" to look like a reflection of the "A"..... Work on that concept

  • Jorge Tamariz

    Jorge Tamariz

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    Try to focus on the words

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 7:01 AM

    I don't see nothing distinctive.

    If you use the Capitals in a memorable way then the old technique of mixing the letters could be used.

    But if you use a good and simple typography I think you will achieve better results.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Concepts aren't bad, just need to be sized down.

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 8:08 AM

    The third design is your strongest. Size down the "DA" and make Dzign.art the main focal point. Not crazy about the supper bright colors but they could still work. Good start, keep at it.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 25, 2009 at 12:41 PM

      My intention to make DA bigger as in case the logo is used in small size - then I might just use DA by itself - is there any other option to make the DA stands out instead of the Dzign.Art? What colour would you suggest to be a better colour combination?

  • juri markelovs

    juri markelovs

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    would make it more colorfull

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 12:30 PM

    would make it more colorfull

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 25, 2009 at 12:42 PM

      I would like to tone down the colour - but if the suggestion is to make it more colourful - is there any colour combination suggestion?