Juri Markelovs

Online Store Landing Page (new version)

By Juri Markelovs

   on Nov 24, 2009
8 Reviews2 Votes0 Favorites313 Views

Concept Reviews

  • marc

    marc

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    1 Vote
    Modernise

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 4:03 AM

    I hate the terms such as Web 2.0, but the web and design does move on. This, i'm sorry to say, looks like it was designed in the 90's.

    It's bland, boring, very static, and unoriginal.

    Back to the drawing board on this I think.

  • Mark Dewey

    Mark Dewey

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    The Bottom section is just not right

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 5:20 AM

    This site it self has the feel of what it is, but the bottom section with the pay options is just not fitting the site as too big maybe or too bare. I seems like it is missing something that i can't put my finger right now.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Good progress

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 8:03 AM

    Here is what I would do to make this a little better. But a white stroke on either side of the page and add a very subtle shadow. Confine the image in the content area to some sort of square or rounded corner box. Add some content about who you are and what your store specializes in. You also need some sort of call to action that is a focal point.

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    love the colors

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 1:18 PM

    but the presentation is not catching...watch cssremix for inspiration

  • Kevin Wong

    Kevin Wong

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 1
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    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    Avoid script font

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 5:00 PM

    Hard to read and scan. I don't even know what the name of this website is.

  • Newbird Design

    Newbird Design

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    not to bad

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 7:57 PM

    i think if you go through and really keep and eye on your line height for your text it could help a lot.

  • Karnika Yashwant

    Karnika Yashwant

    Rank: 5 Advanced

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    This looks like Web 1.0

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 12:07 AM

    This looks like Web 1.0 Site and needs to be designed well and users are not really able to understand what it is completely.

    Also the layout is not proper.

  • Abhinav Lal

    Abhinav Lal

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    a lot of stuff

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 1:14 AM

    First the website does not have name.. the main title is long try using some small and simple name. The font for main header title and the title of content area looks really old style. Also do you really like pink so much as there is too much pink...