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Simple yet very attractive - the feather suits the new bird concept. And blue and green colour matches very well - as Gia mentioned, the white line might need to be removed
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Very nice. As others said, bin the white line. Aside from that, it works well. Good job.
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I love the 3d object and the colors that you chose. My only gripe is how there is a line in the middle of newbird. Take that out and you have a fantastic logo. Great work!
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Good look.
I see the white line has been met with much objection. I kinda like it, although when you're dealing with letters like E, B and R, that have bits in the middle, you might want to move the line up, so that it's between the top and middle branches on the E.
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Get rid of that and your on to a winner.
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also chk the spacing for the text design
and one more question i need to ask u..why two similar green petals and one blue...but rest is g8...
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Newbird Design commented:Thanks very much for the comments, to answer your questions about "why 2 green and 1 blue" to be honest I just felt like it looked right I didn't like the idea of adding another color into the mix. But let me know what you think.
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remove the white line and I think it will be good. Props on using a classic looking font and not something trendy. The logo will hold up for longer that way.
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you have 3 feathers so give it 3 colors-yellow in the middle so it wont get lost at small print size.
Adjust the kerning on DESIGN to have it extend the length of NEWBIRD. It may have to be a bit bolder if reduced to a small size.
Love the 3-d effect but do a version without it in case (again) it needs to be reduced to a tiny size.
Overall a very nice design. Very professional and clean.
oh yeah... lose the white line.
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Todd Pagel commented:I like the geometry and flow of the design but I have to say that my first impression was of leaves, rather than feathers, possibly due to the green coloration of two of the elements. I would also be a little leery of the shaded 3D effect, as this can become awkward at smaller scales. As others have said, the white line in the text distracts rather than enhances. I would also omit the trademark symbol. Proprietary design is normally implied, isn't it? Looks real nice, but I would consider trying a "flat" version.
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Thanks very much i was unsure of this white line