Jakarta Land Web Corporate

Just trying to visit the the website online, it takes more time to load. The design is clean and it can be stretched to 1024. The flash can be improved and the subpages requires lot of improvements.

The colors make the weather look a bit stormy, have you tried a highlight behind the buildings? That way it would look more like the sun was there.

But looks very good, you know how to make these, I see.

Stretch this design. It looks like you know your way around Flash but layout could be improved. You have some spacing and alignment issues through some of the pages. It's not a bad design but could be improved.

I like the clean design. The one thing I might change just to add a little visual interest is a bit more contrast between the gray header/footer and the gray background. Maybe subtlety is what you're going for, but I think it could help it not look so monotone.

Pretty boxy, too... like the others have said. Nicely done overall, though.

It looks neat and clean, but I do agree with Nate that the layout can be made bigger say by 10% to 15%.

Roll Over on the building seems to mislead to 3 different sub pages, even though the three are leading to the same page

Automatic change from day to night view might be a bit "hypnotising". I may suggest to have a function to switch from day to night view, and make the background darker when switched to night view to increase the contrast

there's a nice loading animation, i like the rollovers on the homepage more than the ones on the top on the other pages.. subtle rollovers are nice.. these sort of jump, glisten and change color all at once, i would choose one thing to happen and let that be it. i think the orange looks beautiful. it takes a while for the flash to load on the sub-pages. i think this site accomplishes what it needs to do tho in a very fresh and professional way. i would try to simplify the flash movies.. to make their loading time shorter. good job :)

Its kind of dull, you should make it sunny for a brighter webpage. But thumbs up, i was hoping i could actually zoom in to the building before it take me to the next page though.

Your design is nice, I like it but the goal of this website must be more clear. Maybe you should increase the News & Events box ?

The splash is amazing very very nice you are truly talented . Once in the site the flash headers kill you . A first time visitor or a develop[er with his cache turned off will give this about 6-8 seconds before he clicks off. Even(i think)non flash images are way to big i tried to analyze with "Yslow"but you have the puppy locked down I respect that.

What can I say beautiful but way to heavy. (Rogers Cable 12-20 mb per sec.)

I like the design, the flash is very, very good.

I'd up the contrast between the center and the header/footer a bit and make it look a bit less stormy.

The way the page layout changes though from the flash start though, I dont think is so good.

Ciao molto piacere. Mi dispiace non poterti parlare in inglese ma spero mi capirai ugualmente. Anche io son un web designer e devo confidarti che questo genere di lavori mi piacciono. L'interfaccia è moderna ed i colori dark si associano perfettamente ad una struttura moderna e dinamica come questa. Brava.

i like your logo however i feel the website itself, feels like it was built five years ago.... You are very talented with flash though

It's out too gray. It's going to rain? Put some blue.

For me it's great. I like the logo too. I think you made a great job mixing the real photo with the vectors...

Congrats.

To tell you the truth that kind of flash designs looks outdated to me. I prefer your other creations much better. The colors are not appealing and the first page does not match very well with the other ones. And what is the purpose of the flash animation? Maaf bagiku kurang menarik mas...

more gray, i dont like. need other colors

Pros 1. Nice color scheme 2. Beautiful Flash Pre-loader

3. Simple and Straight forward

Cons 1. Very less readability 2. Not required to give much importance for News and Events 3. Need to optimize the flash

Change the gray to light blue, do it like in the dream not in storm!

Cheers

This is nice as a concept, i think once this is refined (alignment of objects, sharper edges, tidier nav) it will be a very, very nice design. A few other things you could try is maybe moving the buildings to either the left or the right to allow for some more serious content on the opposing side. maybe a footer will help finish the site off. I feel as though there is too much dark aswell, like mentioned before, improve on the contrast maybe add in a very subtle texture on the background and some lighting effects and youll be away laughing.