Gia Josie

Webdesign Corporate

By Gia Josie

   on Nov 23, 2009
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  • Jesus H. Christ

    Jesus H. Christ

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    Paragraph width 480px

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 10:58 PM

    1. I would shorten the welcome message paragraph to maximum width of 480px. When the lines are longer than that, they become difficult to read.

    2. The rest looks great.

    • Gia Josie
      Gia Josie commented:
      Posted: on Nov 23, 2009 at 11:10 PM

      Thanks Christ for your review, i really appreciated.

  • Miro

    Miro

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    looks good

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 11:07 PM

    Very good, I wouldn´t change a thing.

  • Pim Hogeweg

    Pim Hogeweg

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    move the intro paragraph to header picture

    Posted on Nov 24, 2009 at 1:59 AM

    In order to use your space more effective I would move the intro paragraph to the header and make it much shorter, which is better to read.

    Then, after you put it there you just place a 'call-to-action' button under it which guides the user to, for example, the about page.

    For the drop-up navigation, I would use arrows so people can see there is going to flow a menu out of it.

    Design is very clean, I like it. Hope this was helpful ;-)

    • Gia Josie
      Gia Josie commented:
      Posted: on Nov 24, 2009 at 2:08 AM

      Thanks for your input Hogeweg.. i'll try it.

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

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    Intro text

    Posted on Nov 24, 2009 at 5:26 AM

    Like has already been said, your intro text is far too wide, i would look to integrate that on the left hand side of the banner image.

    I would also look at padding the 3 images a little more from each other, they kind of blend into one just now.

    Its very very nice and simple.

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

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    looks nice..

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Content area isn't working for me

    Posted on Nov 24, 2009 at 8:05 AM

    I think the content area could use a bit more interest. Right now it looks like you have concentrated on making your flash piece look really good but I think that the content area doesn't match the caliper of the flash object. Add some shadows, lines, text treatments to bring that area to life.

  • Lucky Fishmedia

    Lucky Fishmedia

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    Too much empty space

    Posted on Nov 24, 2009 at 1:03 PM

    Overall I like the design you have going, I like the colors, the building and how the information is laid out. The only thing that is bothering me is the big empty space to the top left of the building. I think I understand that you are looking for it to be very clean, but it still bothers me. Perhaps, a see through background with a brief catch message to attract the viewer? Since the building is vertical it could be a more vertical box? Just my thoughts, like I said I like the design, good job!

    • Gia Josie
      Gia Josie commented:
      Posted: on Nov 24, 2009 at 9:02 PM

      Yes.. yes i agree with you Bill, thanks Bill

  • Anass Sacha

    Anass Sacha

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    That's Cool But..

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 1:09 PM

    This Layout Is Nice, But The Buildings Should Looks More Pro, Maybe With Vector. They Are Looking Like Semi Original

  • Newbird Design

    Newbird Design

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    pretty cool

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 8:12 PM

    i like this one so far but i think there is alot of empty space in this photo that could be worked with.

  • Cristian Nastasi

    Cristian Nastasi

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    Unico appunto

    Posted on Nov 27, 2009 at 5:23 PM

    Il layout è veramente ben fatto. L'unico appunto è che a mio parere il flash nel top occupa un pò troppo spazio. Chi lavora con basse risoluzioni potrebbe non vedere i contenuti, presenti nella seconda metà della pagina.

  • Mike Goignan

    Mike Goignan

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    Intro text ( like many people here...)

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 6:20 PM

    Everything is cool, but reduce this width.

  • Alex Fuller

    Alex Fuller

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    3D With 2D?

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 9:21 PM

    I would perhaps do some work on the top image. Try to spice it a little maybe add some more colors to it or brighten up the blue. Also unless I'm seeing things; is that 2D and 3D combined? Hmm I'd try to make the building look a little more 2D by adding a filter to it or something perhaps.

  • M. H.

    M. H.

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    how is the content page like

    Posted on Jan 10, 2010 at 5:25 AM

    clean design, but a already said: The welcome text is too wide.

    How is the website supposed to like on the content pages? The animation or flash on the homepage is very big, could be that the menu isn`t visible on low screen resolutions.