Emre Onar

website for dust masks manufacturer

By Emre Onar

   on Nov 22, 2009
9 Reviews5 Votes0 Favorites385 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Robert Tipping

    Robert Tipping

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    Links Dead?

    Posted on Nov 22, 2009 at 5:35 PM

    The designs cool from the picture I like the fresh imagery(pun intended) Post the link lets have a look.

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
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    neat and g8 image in the middle..

    Posted on Nov 22, 2009 at 10:03 PM

    better to align text in left..

  • Ivan de Ramos

    Ivan de Ramos

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
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    Titles

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 2:35 AM

    Clean, powerfull and clever, but i don´t like the use of the logo elements in the titles "Urunlerimiz"...

    Anyway, Great work!

    • Emre Onar
      Emre Onar commented:
      Posted: on Nov 23, 2009 at 4:37 AM

      you are right, i will change logo elements to something else. thanks.

  • Marco Russo

    Marco Russo

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    Nice!

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 6:17 AM

    I do not like the font used in writing "temiz hava". Add a ornament in the bottom part, between the "downloads" section, "mfadan haberler", ect ... For the rest, clean style and captivating. Great work! Congratulations!

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
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    Logo

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 6:18 AM

    I would bring my logo in a little to the right, it hangs off the site on the left at the moment.

    Great image and how its used.

    Not sure about the layout of the footer, just doesn't work for me.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
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    Very different, I like it

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 7:30 AM

    I like your design here. I think it stands out from the crowd in a big way. Content organization is good but the headers repeating those three lines (weeds?) is a bit much. The red sign also is the first thing I look at, not sure you want that. Good work!

  • Shane Kingery

    Shane Kingery

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    B&W pics

    Posted on Nov 27, 2009 at 7:42 PM

    The first thing I thought when I looked at this is "why are the images of the people wearing masks black and white?" The whole layout is SO colorful and beautiful and then people are black and white. They should be FULL of color because their lungs are so non-dust filled that they look full of life.

    What would it look like if an actual photo of the mask were wrapped around an illustrated model?

  • Keli Marks

    Keli Marks

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    clutter

    Posted on Dec 03, 2009 at 12:59 AM

    This is beautiful. really. Its even feasible to read, however, there is too much going on. The visual hierarchy isn't clear enough to lead me through the content in a clear way. I would decide what really needs to be communicated on the front page rather than trying to fill space. This could use some clean up but that you have a truly unique beautiful site. Would love to see this coded!

  • Ali Kasimoglu

    Ali Kasimoglu

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
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    bg

    Posted on Dec 14, 2009 at 7:47 AM

    i recommend to change background.