Emre Onar

t-shirt website

By Emre Onar

   on Nov 22, 2009
8 Reviews1 Vote0 Favorites201 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Jesus H. Christ

    Jesus H. Christ

    Rank: 4 Master

    261

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    I don't understand...

    Posted on Nov 22, 2009 at 9:28 PM

    Too complicated for me. Perhaps it's the language barrier.

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

    Rank: 2 Titan

    4866

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    i didnt like the logo at all..

    Posted on Nov 22, 2009 at 10:02 PM

    rest is pretty fancy and creative but readability is bit poor

  • Marco Russo

    Marco Russo

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    9

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Mmmm ...

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 6:30 AM

    I am not convinced a lot the first version ... Maybe the style is too scratched, dirty, and dark.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

    9919

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Second design, BY FAR!

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 7:27 AM

    The first design is way too out there and busy. I like the progress on the second design but would like to see you finish it more. Post your progress on it, good work so far.

  • Francesco Guietti

    Francesco Guietti

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    65

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes
    Very original

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 9:05 AM

    I really like the originality of this site. Are the graphics settings that I like most.

  • Rajiv Mehta

    Rajiv Mehta

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

    144

    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    colour scheme

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 11:15 AM

    use bright fun and youthful colours.brown is not the colour of youth.make it striking,,,use young language which is being used.keep a facebook icon on the homepage and twitter icon....create themes for catagories of t shirts and use copy matter based upon different themes

  • Gia Josie

    Gia Josie

    Rank: 2 Titan

    575

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    too much visual

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 10:26 PM

    The focus design on the visual not selling the merchant..

  • Oskar Pålsson

    Oskar Pålsson

    Rank: 5 Advanced

    44

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    The frames

    Posted on Dec 04, 2009 at 6:59 AM

    To cluttered site. To many waves and shapes. Logo barely showing.