Josh Tummel

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By Josh Tummel

   on Nov 19, 2009
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  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    too visual

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 2:15 PM

    it's nicely laid out... and has a good grid... but it's almost too extreme for the eyes!

    tone down the colours a bit, and make the buttons less blingy, and this may actually sell.

    keep going, good start

    • Josh Tummel
      Josh Tummel commented:
      Posted: on Nov 19, 2009 at 2:22 PM

      Thanks for the comment. Believe it or not it started out even more extreme. I will try to tone it down even more, and see if I can come up with different button styles.

    • Nick Kerschgens
      Nick Kerschgens commented:
      Posted: on Nov 19, 2009 at 2:26 PM

      The first question that came up was "for what business will this template be? what kind of business is it for or what is it going to sell?" When this question is answered, my comment can be better argumented (or not)...

  • Michael Szczepanski

    Michael Szczepanski

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    Tone down the colors.

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 6:31 PM

    The layout of information is nice, but I think the colors are WAY too warm.

  • Miro

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    looks ok

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 11:00 PM

    It looks good if you are planning to sell it like you said. But is just changing the logo enough, should there more personalization?

  • Swarat Ghosh

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    colors need to toned down a bit !!

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 11:34 PM

    its creating problem to my eyes, align properly your footer as well better to align your telephone section with right side of take a tour section

  • Madhu Naicker

    Madhu Naicker

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    Tone down colours

    Posted on Nov 20, 2009 at 3:58 AM

    As other users have said, the colours are a little too bright. If you tone them down, I think you'll have a great looking template! In the second half of the template (Welcome to our website/What's included section), it appears that the 3 parts are not of equal size. Is that your plan?

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Well done!

    Posted on Nov 20, 2009 at 6:40 AM

    Very nice concept! Your header looks amazing, very well done. Your buttons don't quite look right to me, I would try a different treatment. I would also add some sort of stroke to the bottom of the header. Your content could also use a bit of detail work as well. Maybe some shadows or dividers to liven up the area a bit. Keep up the good work!

    • Newbird Design
      Newbird Design commented:
      Posted: on Nov 20, 2009 at 9:38 AM

      Very Nice layout and attention to the small details, would maybe have like to seen a bit of a different color pallete with maybe some greens. Over all Great Job!