Alpis Design

The Prestige Events Website

By Alpis Design

   on Nov 19, 2009
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  • Josh Tummel

    Josh Tummel

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    Add life to it

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 12:54 PM

    It seems kind of lifeless to me as is, and needs some kind of abstract background or something. The page headers are also too dark, and seem to get lost in the background. The initial focal point of the design is the "Defiance" image, but after that I have no idea where to look. Maybe the Pepsi logo? Also, by doing a quick scan of the page, I have no idea what it is about. The Pepsi logo is actually the first thing that makes sense to me, so I'd assume it's about Pepsi.

  • Nate Hamilton

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    Keep working

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 1:40 PM

    You have a good start here with your colors and even the header design is decent. think you need to work through the rest of your design. Concentrate on the details like borders, colors, shadows and textures.

  • Swarat Ghosh

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    use bright color font for header

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 12:19 PM

    can't see ur header text against your bg..

    • Swarat Ghosh
      Swarat Ghosh commented:
      Posted: on Nov 19, 2009 at 12:23 PM

      even the footer text next to copyright on white can't be seen..my request t you is just play around little bit with brighter shade of that pink i am very sure u will get your best :)

  • Jesus H. Christ

    Jesus H. Christ

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    Use a 960 grid for the layout

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 12:44 PM

    Your website has lots of good content. It's just organized and presented poorly.

    LOGO - The word Prestige is way too big. You should group The Prestige Events together in some way so that it feels like a brand, or a name. The words The and Events look like they are navigation items, rather than part of the logo.

    TEXT COLOR - The maroon is too dark and hides in the background. Especially on an LCD monitor. It needs more contrast to be usable.

    The headers cannot be that dark. A header is supposed to stick out so a person can scan the page and know which section to read. Currently, your headers are darker than the body writing. They are barely visible, and they don't serve their purpose at the moment. Make them More Prominent than the body writing.

    LAYOUT - There isn't enough structure. It feels like the body content is floating away in all directions. You could use some borders and backgrounds to bring it all together.

    The body paragraphs are way too long to be easily legible. Cap the width at 480px.

    You can embed headlines from News section on your home page. It will make your website feel alive, recent, updated. And you can put the contact information on the home page as well so its within reach for a potential client.

    NAVIGATION MENU - Could use some more style.

    WIDTH - You can shrink the overall width of your website because you don't have that much content. It will make the text easier to read.

    It's really exciting. There's lots you can improve upon. Using ConceptFeedback, you're going to learn very quickly :)

  • Kamran Arasteh

    Kamran Arasteh

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    change graphics

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 11:51 AM

    I don't think this design is conveying the purpose of the website to me.

    Also that graphic image is similar to some game websites .

    Also, I think if the name of the website is Prestige Events, then in the banner those two words should be the same size. The way it is "events" seems like an unimportant word like "the"

  • Miro

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    the content area

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 10:49 PM

    The header isn´t bad, but the content area is. You need to bring more life to it by dividing the content into smaller bits, using headlines, maybe pictures, dividers etc. And the headline color is too dark now.

  • Newbird Design

    Newbird Design

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    The type layout

    Posted on Nov 20, 2009 at 4:53 PM

    At first glance i like the colors and the cleanness of it. i think you might want to do a bit more formatting of the content area.