Giuliano Ambrosio

BlogBabel Layout

By Giuliano Ambrosio

   on Nov 19, 2009
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Concept Reviews

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 2
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    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    No text hierarchy

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 8:17 AM

    Your content doesn't have any sort of hierarchy. I don't really know where to look because you haven't created any focus. I would try to do that with colored backgrounds, shadows and dividers.

  • Matthieu Breton

    Matthieu Breton

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
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    • Engagement: 4
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    The head have a big height.

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 9:20 AM

    Resize the head and create a separate between text

  • Neven Udovicic

    Neven Udovicic

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    I agree with separating the text...

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 11:31 AM

    I find it a little bit monotonous... Although it's nice and clean.

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
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    its very clean

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 12:39 PM

    nice start bit bussy though!!

  • Jesus H. Christ

    Jesus H. Christ

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 3
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    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Focal points

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 1:53 PM

    As Nate Hamilton pointed out, you're not using focal points very well.

    Currently, the first place my eyes go to is the video stream, then I'm looking all over the place, because no other section is highlighted more than any other section.

    I think the current website (it.blogbabel.com) looks and works better.

    Also, it feels like you removed a lot of the home page content. I can't understand Italian, but something feels like its missing, lol.

  • Fenson Jeremy

    Fenson Jeremy

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    background colors

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 3:47 PM

    I suggest adding different background colors to create focus and separate content.

  • Michael Szczepanski

    Michael Szczepanski

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Add call to action.

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 6:28 PM

    I realize this is a magazine/blog but it seems like I'm looking at a lot of information without any real direction. The structure, logo, contrast, and shadows are all great.

  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    hierarchy

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 10:17 PM

    As already said, this needs stronger hierarchy. Try using dividers, other color on the headlines, different type sizes...

  • Eberth Manjarrez

    Eberth Manjarrez

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Navigation buttons

    Posted on Nov 22, 2009 at 2:58 PM

    The only thing I would change would be to apply the same shading of the black navigation to the purple active page buttons.

  • Francesco Guietti

    Francesco Guietti

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes
    Very good work

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 9:19 AM

    I visited the site and I like it. Change the background and work more on writing BlogBabel that, in my opinion, deserves more attention and perhaps more originality. The work is very good for me. Congratulations

  • Newbird Design

    Newbird Design

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    0 Votes
    too wordy

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 8:54 PM

    i think the logo will work but i think there is too much content all at once. If i were to come to this site for the first time it wouldn't make me want to blog.

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
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    I can't find much fault.

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 6:59 AM

    Its very clean, and i can't find any real fault with the design to be perfectly honest.

  • Augusto Martins

    Augusto Martins

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Engagement: 5
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    I like it, is very singular

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 7:45 AM

    Maybe you try to change the background color!