Alan Horne

Airport Parking Website (2nd Concept)

By Alan Horne

   on Nov 19, 2009
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  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

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    this is much better

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 5:35 AM

    its quite unique style.. :)

  • alex tarrask

    alex tarrask

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    I miss the focal point

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 5:38 AM

    I think the main box should have more visibility than the smaller ones. My attention is drawn to the bottom first. I should put this on the left part, and highlight it a bit. Also, the plane towards right (that also would give the impression of speed).

    Nice work.

    • Alan Horne
      Alan Horne commented:
      Posted: on Nov 19, 2009 at 5:40 AM

      Thanks Alex, i wasn't sure about the quote box being left or right, so that i can change fairly easily.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Better

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 8:14 AM

    I don't know about the plane extending behind the four objects. I would make those objects mor elike tabs below the image. Your dark blues are starting to compete as well. I would use the dark blue color for only the navigation and then choose a light blue highlight for the objects below. Good progress, keep at it!

  • Matthieu Breton

    Matthieu Breton

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    Colors are too dark

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 9:22 AM

    Get a blue more electric and find another photo background. You can slide the quick quote in center of the page.

  • Kamran Arasteh

    Kamran Arasteh

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    enhance the background image

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 12:02 PM

    I think the airplane bg image is sending the wrong visual info. It looks more like an airport website than an airport-parking website.

    I'd change the image with less focus on an airplane and more on parked car/sign... Otherwise it looks cool :)

  • Miro

    Miro

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    The image

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 10:09 PM

    Kamran is right, the cars are missing.