Romy Haik

Fat Astronaut Productions logo

By Romy Haik

   on Nov 18, 2009
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  • Kevin Williamson

    Kevin Williamson

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    I might try a cleaner font

    Posted on Nov 18, 2009 at 4:09 PM

    Overall very nice. I might consider using a very clean, simple, light font like avenir light or something like that which would echo the clean lines of the astronaut vector art. I think you get a kidsy feel just from the artwork.

    Is there a particular reason for it to be an imaginary company? Just building up your portfolio? If so, I would suggest doing work for real companies even if it is pro bono. It is much tougher and much more educational to do work with and for real clients.

    • Romy Haik
      Romy Haik commented:
      Posted: on Nov 18, 2009 at 4:26 PM

      I am doing for real companies, just doing some imaginary stuff so I dont get rusty, I am training myself. Thank you for your comment!

      Although, why did you rank the purpose as 1? I think the idea was passed out very well.

      About the suggestion on the font, I will be trying it, thank you.

    • Kevin Williamson
      Kevin Williamson commented:
      Posted: on Nov 18, 2009 at 5:41 PM

      The one on purpose was just because it did not really have a purpose. As a fictional job there is no demographic, no client to approve, no set of objectives. It wasn't a negative, just a reflection of it being a hypothetical job.

  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    typeface

    Posted on Nov 18, 2009 at 6:54 PM

    I am thinking the same as Kevin about the typeface, no need for it to be so childish. The astronaut drawing looks good and I think it will look even better when you add colors to it.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Awesome

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 7:54 AM

    I LOVE the astronaut! The font and stacking is where this logo starts falling apart. I would try some different fonts and stacking methods. Good start!

  • Mark Lundy

    Mark Lundy

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
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    graphic

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 9:45 AM

    Seems way too busy, font could also be better.

  • Lucky Fishmedia

    Lucky Fishmedia

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
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    Font

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 9:55 AM

    I really like the logo, I love the little circles for the hands and feet. I don't care for the font used very much though . Maybe something a bit more "space oriented looking" or "sleeker". Very cool logo, I really like it!

  • Alpis Design

    Alpis Design

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    u got a good idea

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 11:03 AM

    But I think u might try another font and if u want add some color to it....

  • Fenson Jeremy

    Fenson Jeremy

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    change the typeface

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 4:02 PM

    I think the mark is great but probably you could change the typeface to a less childish one like an adult handwriting rather than a child's.

  • Gia Josie

    Gia Josie

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 2
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    really nice but..

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 10:34 PM

    you got the idea of the astronaut, but i don't get the "click", what the meaning of that logo? not clear enough. The typo is too "playing", not have a characteristic and related with the logo

  • Riady Santoso

    Riady Santoso

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Simpler typeface

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 1:59 AM

    I like the cubby astronout :) It looks cute - if it's accompanied by simplre typeface or even - fat typeface, it might go hand in hand and becomes good friends :)

  • Newbird Design

    Newbird Design

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    lol

    Posted on Nov 26, 2009 at 8:59 PM

    i think the mark could be improved with cleaner more flowing lines... but its pretty funny.

  • Kevin Tomasic

    Kevin Tomasic

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
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    Stay Puffed!

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 5:19 PM

    Its the Stay Puffed Marshmallow Man ... in space! :)

    I actually like the font a lot. It adds character to your company and I think that's what you're going for. I might try "fattening" up the font a bit, see how that looks, but it might not contrast well with the astronaut.