Airport Parking website

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Objective: To make the website look clean and fresh
Target Market: Everyone
Added on Nov 18, 2009 at 6:10 AM

Starting working in my new job and the first port of call is to update the companies website and make it feel fresh.

They sell airport parking, and are the market leader, but as with their competitors they have a fairly average website, so they needed an update.

I'm waiting on feedback from management, but any suggestions for changes would be great.

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  • Miro
    Reputation: 2598
    images

    The images make it look quite busy, how about a smaller plane and a car photo from further away?

      Posted: on Nov 18, 2009 at 7:22 AM
      • Design: 3
      • Purpose: 3
      • Originality: 2
      • Engagement: 2
      • Nice suggestions.

        The main image of the cars will definately be getting changed, its more a spaceholder at the moment, and will be getting replaced by a professional picture taken at the parking lot, will probably be something like the image on www.ncp.co.uk

        Posted: on Nov 18, 2009 at 7:41 AM
    • Bert Mostert
      Reputation: 37
      quick quote

      Hi, fresh it is! May i suggest you put more emphasis on the quick quote part? I think it could stand out way more and this way it gets a bit lost in the design visual. I think your client will agree, if you make it stand out more they will have more quick quote conversions.

        Posted: on Nov 18, 2009 at 7:42 AM
        • Design: 3
        • Purpose: 2
        • Originality: 2
        • Engagement: 3
        • Yeah definately will take that on board, although thats one of the main things they like so far, haha.

          I tried making the sticker effect so that it was eye catching, but might need to re-think it.

          Posted: on Nov 18, 2009 at 7:44 AM
      • Nate Hamilton
        Reputation: 7447
        Too busy and dark

        The grid you are using here works for your purposes. However I would work on making this less busy and complicated. The colors are also really dark. Try lightening them up a bit and bring some more white space in as well.

          Posted: on Nov 18, 2009 at 8:39 AM
          • Design: 2
          • Purpose: 2
          • Originality: 2
          • Engagement: 2
          • Yeah too dark was a comment that was mentioned too, think i need to freshen it up a little.

            Also doing a design of my own for the site, to give them 2 to choose from, so when i post that up, hopefully you can see where i wanted to go with it.

            Posted: on Nov 18, 2009 at 8:48 AM
        • Romy Haik
          Reputation: 292
          Too noisy

          I think the website is too noisy, try making everything smoother, make some images out of focus (Add some blur maybe). I would make the plane picture smaller, as mentioned before by Miro. Nice design, not very creative. I would make something special, show us why we should choose them, and noone else, how are they different?

            Posted: on Nov 18, 2009 at 3:04 PM
            • Design: 3
            • Purpose: 3
            • Originality: 2
            • Engagement: 3

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