Alan Horne

Airport Parking website

By Alan Horne

   on Nov 18, 2009
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  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    3 Votes
    images

    Posted on Nov 18, 2009 at 7:22 AM

    The images make it look quite busy, how about a smaller plane and a car photo from further away?

    • Alan Horne
      Alan Horne commented:
      Posted: on Nov 18, 2009 at 7:41 AM

      Nice suggestions.

      The main image of the cars will definately be getting changed, its more a spaceholder at the moment, and will be getting replaced by a professional picture taken at the parking lot, will probably be something like the image on www.ncp.co.uk

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    2 Votes
    Too busy and dark

    Posted on Nov 18, 2009 at 8:39 AM

    The grid you are using here works for your purposes. However I would work on making this less busy and complicated. The colors are also really dark. Try lightening them up a bit and bring some more white space in as well.

    • Alan Horne
      Alan Horne commented:
      Posted: on Nov 18, 2009 at 8:48 AM

      Yeah too dark was a comment that was mentioned too, think i need to freshen it up a little.

      Also doing a design of my own for the site, to give them 2 to choose from, so when i post that up, hopefully you can see where i wanted to go with it.

  • Bert Mostert

    Bert Mostert

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    quick quote

    Posted on Nov 18, 2009 at 7:42 AM

    Hi, fresh it is! May i suggest you put more emphasis on the quick quote part? I think it could stand out way more and this way it gets a bit lost in the design visual. I think your client will agree, if you make it stand out more they will have more quick quote conversions.

    • Alan Horne
      Alan Horne commented:
      Posted: on Nov 18, 2009 at 7:44 AM

      Yeah definately will take that on board, although thats one of the main things they like so far, haha.

      I tried making the sticker effect so that it was eye catching, but might need to re-think it.

  • Romy Haik

    Romy Haik

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Too noisy

    Posted on Nov 18, 2009 at 3:04 PM

    I think the website is too noisy, try making everything smoother, make some images out of focus (Add some blur maybe). I would make the plane picture smaller, as mentioned before by Miro. Nice design, not very creative. I would make something special, show us why we should choose them, and noone else, how are they different?