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very surprised not to see even a single musical instrument or music notes..in a music program poster..rest is nice 3rd and 5th is very nice..
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What I like in the 3rd poster is the background texture. The 5th poster looks really fresh and friendly...
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Hi Kevin,
I prefer the third one down.
I would maybe try and get some more christmas feeling in there. Maybe by drawing in red and green pencils?
Maybe have something said other than what you currently do? I thought it is dear to see kids writing, then I read the question. Why would the kids ask if he is his friend, for of course he is. Why not say something related to the music, like I hope you listen to the words from our heart, or I pray this song to you. On this christmas day...
Maybe add a drawn star, a drawn present, a drawn reindeer....? Just to bring Christmas in there a bit more?
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Kevin Williamson commented:good idea to add a star or maybe a present. The idea of the note was how little kids (at least way back when I was a kid before the beginning of time) used to pass notes like this back and forth. My thought was that as you say, of course Jesus is there best friend so he would mark it right away. Maybe that doesn't come through though. And of course technically preschoolers cannot write either! Any other opinions on the note?
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Amy Feger commented:Hi Kevin, I guess I was just a bit spooked. Considering jesus has passed away, so how is it he could mark it. I get the wrong vibe from it. Even though the question is fitting to the title. (Maybe it's just me.)
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I like the punch A LOT but space out the lettering a bit more. and enlarge the subtitle
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It looks like a chewing-gum logo ! try other colors !
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You really need to get the musical message across!
1 and 2 too vague and garish (I like the chewing gum comment!); 3 too text-heavy for preschoolers; 4 my favourite, 5 good too. But MUSIC!
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Just to give it a hint of Christmas I would add the Star of Bethlehem in the upper right created using the hand drawing technique used for the figures. I like the Yes or No. I can remember using that one myself in school!
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I like your first concept the most. I would get rid of the cd but other than that, I think it works for your purposes.
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