Heidi Chan

design roof logo

By Heidi Chan

   on Nov 16, 2009
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  • Sean Larkin

    Sean Larkin

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    Posted on Nov 16, 2009 at 10:04 AM

    Ben is correct, you should lose the drop shadow, and you definitely need to show the leg of the G.

    I'm not feeling this at all...

    I like the font, but slamming it into the top of a building detracts from it.

    Are there a lot of trees growing on rooftops where you live? If not, then your potential clients may be confused by the use of a tree up there.

    I'd make the width of the building the same as the width of designroof.

    Give the building a door. (maybe make it green).

  • Nabil Medjebeur

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    The Title

    Posted on Nov 17, 2009 at 2:05 AM

    You can make it looks like a real title on a building's roof.

    The "i" don't looks like a "tree" as supoosed to be, but more like a pin !

  • Alex Collins

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    Might look better without the drop shadow

    Posted on Nov 17, 2009 at 2:01 PM

    I like the overall concept, however it might look better without the drop shadow also, like other people have said it would look better with more of the type showing. maybe try an upper case type as they're all 'above the line'.

  • Shabbir Hussain

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    3rd design.

    Posted on Nov 18, 2009 at 12:52 AM

    You are going somewhere with the 3rd design. Work on it. Consider omitting the horizontal line there.

  • Nate Hamilton

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    Readability

    Posted on Nov 18, 2009 at 8:01 AM

    This logo is lacking readability in a big way. The focus is definitely on the object itself and not the word. I would revisit this.

  • Swarat Ghosh

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    nice start dude...

    Posted on Nov 16, 2009 at 2:35 AM

    i really like the design might u display some more lower part (visual) of the font typo..

    • heidi chan
      heidi chan commented:
      Posted: on Nov 16, 2009 at 6:41 AM

      Dear swarat,

      Thanks a lot for your suggestion, i've revised it, is it better?

    • Swarat Ghosh
      Swarat Ghosh commented:
      Posted: on Nov 16, 2009 at 6:44 AM

      surly i think now the writing is much better.. :)

  • Ben Walker

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    show me the g!

    Posted on Nov 16, 2009 at 8:36 AM

    I like the feel of it.

    Definitely show more of the text, especially the bottom half of the g.

    Be nice to see it a bit bigger.

    Personally I would take off the shadow from the windows/squares and maybe make the black a tiny bit lighter to give it a 'print fee'.

    Nice work :)