Swarat Ghosh

logo for architectural firm "Green house"

By Swarat Ghosh

   on Nov 14, 2009
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  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    2 Votes
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    Posted on Nov 14, 2009 at 9:30 AM

    First one, so beautiful, right on spot! Only move the words a little closer to each other.

  • Tyler Cooper

    Tyler Cooper

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Thicker typeface

    Posted on Nov 14, 2009 at 6:02 PM

    The only thing I would change is maybe make the typeface a little thicker. Other than that great work. I really like it.

  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
    1 Vote
    Placement of pic to words, space between words.

    Posted on Nov 14, 2009 at 9:56 PM

    Hi Swarat,

    I agree with Miro.

    I really think the first one is cute. I am not to fond of the second one, it just doesn't have the same effect as the top one. On the second one, maybe if the house was black and the type white, it would feel better.

    Don't forget to balance the logo above the words. Either make the whole house pic bigger to fit alignment on the right and left of the words below it, or at least center it above the words.

  • Rajavel Ramasamy

    Rajavel Ramasamy

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 2
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    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Nice Try..But I have seen this somewhere...

    Posted on Nov 14, 2009 at 10:47 AM

    Try with some other typos...

    • Swarat Ghosh
      Swarat Ghosh commented:
      Posted: on Nov 14, 2009 at 11:59 AM

      no clue what u want to say ??

    • Codedude
      Codedude commented:
      Posted: on Nov 14, 2009 at 3:48 PM

      I think he means try another font...but I like the font