Noel Tock

Irish Pub (Part 3)

By Noel Tock

   on Nov 11, 2009
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  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
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    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    nothing to change

    Posted on Nov 11, 2009 at 3:16 PM

    It looks good, I think there is no need to change anything.

  • Sassyx

    Sassyx

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    Looking good

    Posted on Nov 11, 2009 at 7:08 PM

    Looking good.

  • Ashe Abbott

    Ashe Abbott

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
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    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Perfect!

    Posted on Nov 11, 2009 at 8:37 PM

    I agree -- this looks fabulous!!! :D

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
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    1 Vote
    g8 work dude..!!!

    Posted on Nov 12, 2009 at 12:10 AM

    love the design ..no change is recommended

  • Jai Sala

    Jai Sala

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    1 Vote
    amazing!

    Posted on Nov 12, 2009 at 3:43 AM

    completely awesome.

  • Rajavel Ramasamy

    Rajavel Ramasamy

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    1 Vote
    Perfect

    Posted on Nov 12, 2009 at 5:31 AM

    Good work on the colors, menus and the branding. Keep it up

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 3
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    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Looks great!

    Posted on Nov 12, 2009 at 6:59 AM

    GREAT work on this so far. I really like most of what you have done. I'm not sold on the spacing of the content in the header. The hours/address seem to way too spaced out. The navigation also seems a little hidden. I would make the navigation stand out more.

    Like I said, great work on this site. You really have brought this design around!

    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Nov 15, 2009 at 3:06 AM

      Thank you very much Nate, valid comments too, if I revise it in the near future I'll definitely consider playing around with that. Cheers

  • Codedude

    Codedude

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    a little whitespace here and there

    Posted on Nov 12, 2009 at 11:48 AM

    I would add some more space between your picture and the text in the middle section. Other than that, I really like this design.

    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Nov 15, 2009 at 3:07 AM

      Thank you for the comment and suggestion Cooldude!

  • Magnus Fossum

    Magnus Fossum

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    great

    Posted on Nov 13, 2009 at 5:26 AM

    this is great, I really like it. totally the irish feeling.

  • Fredperes Peres

    Fredperes Peres

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 5
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    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Looks good!

    Posted on Nov 13, 2009 at 6:20 AM

    Great work, my friend. Just one thing: what do yout think to change the subscribe button? Use a little css code.

    Hum... I'm thirsty!

  • Bonnie Cotier

    Bonnie Cotier

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
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    • Engagement: 4
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    Lovely choice of colors and feeling. Excellent job and the navigation all works well.

    I had no worries about the copy on the masthead. Although I was a taken back when I clicked on the images on the right side that I had left the site and went to flicker. Not bad just a little warning to me then the harshness of the flicker white would not have been so in my face.

    Can you put a discrete title at the top "flicker gallery" Better is any way to code them to go to the lovely gallery you have online? That would be very nice. And that was well done by the way. Liked the interactivity of being able to add photos.

    One tiny comment on the menu... no currency amount... it is Swiss Francs Correct? Nice with the two languages.

    As to languages are you adding others especially German for the locals or a translator?

    Also I did not know if the newsletter is printed or emailed. nice but maybe a blurb to sell me on what I want your newsletter.

    What about tweets...

    Oh and total perfection the blackboard with the football matches!!! Love it!

  • Carole Felmy

    Carole Felmy

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
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    0 Votes
    more padding

    Posted on Nov 14, 2009 at 9:29 PM

    This definitely suits the mood of an Irish bar...

    Maybe more padding is needed around in the blackboard and main content...

    I like the newsletter / torn piece of newspaper idea, maybe the main content could use something similar rather than the 'rolling' paper which looks more 'middle ages' than Irish pub.

  • Corinne Ducusin

    Corinne Ducusin

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Nothing!

    Posted on Nov 15, 2009 at 1:14 AM

    This is a SUCH great improvement from the first iteration you posted awhile back. I can tell you really worked hard on this!

    I'm nitpicking but I'd like to mention that the button in the contact page is a little bright against the paper. I would use a darker color much like the background. Also, as fredperes mentioned, style that button for the newsletter!

    Overall, you created a great atmosphere. +1

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
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    Nothing

    Posted on Nov 15, 2009 at 10:29 AM

    I would leave it as is, as this is the best design.

  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes
    Type attention

    Posted on Nov 15, 2009 at 1:21 PM

    Hi Noel,

    I really like this one. I like that you have the bartender up front and personal

    I only suggest two things to polish this up.

    I love the view of the top photo, it just gets me a bit to see the blurred people.

    The other tid bit is the type block next to the bar tender pic. There are a lot of gaps between words. and one little word is left by itself at the end of the paragraph. I don't know the exact solution to solve that one. Maybe make the paper bigger, the pic placement different?

    Nice pleasant colors.

  • Aldo Gustavo Ribeiro

    Aldo Gustavo Ribeiro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
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    • Engagement: 2
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    I like the lights, dont change anything...

    Posted on Nov 15, 2009 at 6:08 PM

    Very good 3d look but the frame of the left could have less contrast.

  • RICARDO SOUZA

    RICARDO SOUZA

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
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    Seperate the text in more paragraphs.

    Posted on Nov 15, 2009 at 7:14 PM

    i like the paper detail.

  • Ben Walker

    Ben Walker

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
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    less content, more purpose

    Posted on Nov 16, 2009 at 8:33 AM

    Pretty good, I like it :)

    It does look a bit 'contenty' though if that makes sense... it could dow ith a little more hierarchy, and a bit more emphasis on a few bits.

    Definitely review it against whatever the business objectives are here.

  • Octavio Corral

    Octavio Corral

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    header and body division

    Posted on Nov 16, 2009 at 1:11 PM

    I like it a lot! I feel it just needs a tiny bit extra to make it superb.

    I feel like the whole site in general is too clean and too compartmentalized for a Irish Pub. My recommendation would be to see if you can integrate the header with the green BG a little better. I love the overall look but it feels a little "stiff" see if you can grunge things up just a tad by making the black header go into the green.

    hehe just an opinion. take it or leave it. overall, very nice!

  • PAres Tailor

    PAres Tailor

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
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    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes

    i defo thinks there needs to be some more space from the main picture in the middle and the text.

  • Janell Carson

    Janell Carson

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    I wouldn't change anything.

    Posted on Nov 17, 2009 at 9:15 AM

    This is a very inviting website and it makes you want to go to the pub. The top banner picture is gorgeous. I like the use of the green stripe background and green text to accent the Shamrock name. The newsletter signup is very clever. I think you have a winner.

  • Sean Larkin

    Sean Larkin

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 5
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    0 Votes
    done

    Posted on Nov 12, 2009 at 7:37 AM

    Great job!