Swarat Ghosh

logo for a mobile company

By Swarat Ghosh

   on Nov 09, 2009
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  • Tamara Elphick

    Tamara Elphick

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    Posted on Nov 09, 2009 at 12:55 PM

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  • Kate Hindin-Nikau

    Kate Hindin-Nikau

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    Classic, simple, good icon.

    Posted on Nov 09, 2009 at 5:39 PM

    At first glance I thought it was supposed to say talk money - but now it looks like talk meny - what is that? Aside from that it's a good logo. simple, good use of icons to show the industry and good font. It's not the most original idea around but it's eye catching and I think it will work well. I prefer the blu - the orange and white looks a bit budget.

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    i get the talk

    Posted on Nov 10, 2009 at 1:20 AM

    but not the many...

    I read it as NAte did talkmeny...

    I would look at a better font... I like the idea behind it though...

    One suggestion would be to make it like 'talkmany' and keep the quotation marks big, like you have lots to say..

    Good luck

  • Sassyx

    Sassyx

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    Talkmore logo

    Posted on Nov 10, 2009 at 2:57 AM

    This logo looks so much like the talkmore logo. http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/16769

    • Swarat Ghosh
      Swarat Ghosh commented:
      Posted: on Nov 10, 2009 at 3:24 AM

      the font and treatment of graphics are different i guess..chk my new version..hope u will get my answer :)

  • Miro

    Miro

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    typeface

    Posted on Nov 09, 2009 at 1:06 PM

    You keep yourself busy, Swarat :-D ...I would try this with a rounder typeface, to better go with the a-signs. And if you can, change the tagline. I like the idea, I don´t know so much about logos so can´t say if the signs are overused. I like anyway :-)

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 1:14 PM

      http://new.myfonts.com/fonts/larabie/neuropolitical/ this font already has the kind of a and e you need, just fill the holes (or is it opening in english..?) EDIT -> No sorry, I tried it, looks really ugly if the openings are filled.

    • Swarat Ghosh
      Swarat Ghosh commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 10:12 PM

      thanks a lot Miro for ur effort...i too will try with some other fonts...

  • Sean Larkin

    Sean Larkin

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    colors

    Posted on Nov 09, 2009 at 1:39 PM

    I agree with Nate, Tamara and Miro.

    I can't tell if those are word bubbles or apostrophes.

    I think you could make the word in color, and the marks in white.

    Shrink the tagline a tiny bit so that the right edge of the Y lines up with the right edge of the M.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    What does it say?

    Posted on Nov 09, 2009 at 12:39 PM

    Is it "Talkmeny"...if so, i think you're OK, otherwise you need to work on readability. I like the concept, even though the quote marks are a bit overused in logos like this. The logo also doesn't really get across what the company does. Maybe a better tagline would help define this.

    • Swarat Ghosh
      Swarat Ghosh commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 10:11 PM

      sorry Nate its "Talk Many" i have used "a" to people as if some sort of communication taking place in between them..as for tagline we have to consult with client..