Octavio CorralPremium Concept

Website for Freight Transportation Company

By Octavio Corral

   on Nov 06, 2009
14 Reviews7 Votes1 Favorite796 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

    3658

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
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    two things

    Posted on Nov 07, 2009 at 12:00 AM

    This looks really good, not much to change. But I suppose two things: Adding a "Careers" link to the main menu (so the potential drivers are sure to find it) and filling the date field on the homepage with color - it looks a little like a broken link now.

    • Octavio Corral
      Octavio Corral commented:
      Posted: on Nov 07, 2009 at 4:33 AM

      I understand this is a tough call on your end, but can you try and elaborate as to why "Careers" would make more sense than "Drivers."

      When creating the sitemap, I had to make some decisions in terms of Company Employment vs Truck Drivers. In the end, I decided the truck driving division should be completely separate from the on-site employee section. (for many reasons).

      If I change the top section to "Careers." Keep in mind this will now include the new audience of "on-site employees" and will in essence, completely re-define the entire section.

      Your thoughts?

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Nov 07, 2009 at 4:54 AM

      I think you have thought of the site structure very well. I would do it so, that I would keep the "drivers" on the top menu (to serve the already employed drivers and those interested in becoming ones). In addition to that I would add the "careers" to the top menu to give high visibility to all job offerings this company has.

      Does it make sense (if it doesn´t, it is probably because of my bad english, sorry...)?

    • Octavio Corral
      Octavio Corral commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 2:23 PM

      yes your comment makes sense. thank you for the feedback

  • Joe Aeppli

    Joe Aeppli

    Rank: 1 Elite

    154

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    "Site Map" Area

    Posted on Nov 07, 2009 at 2:11 AM

    I strongly agree with Miro on the two areas mentioned. The only other thing that I would suggest is making the "site Map" area have a little bit more contrast. It is a little hard to read. Maybe lighten up the blue used in the text. Overall I like what you have going, just a few minor things to clean up.

    • Octavio Corral
      Octavio Corral commented:
      Posted: on Nov 07, 2009 at 4:29 AM

      For sure I agree with the blue links on the sitemap. I have noticed on some PC monitors it is not very easy to read

  • Josh Jackson

    Josh Jackson

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Hierarchy on splash page?

    Posted on Nov 07, 2009 at 10:08 AM

    Octavio, this is a very solid design. Great job.

    In addition to Miro's and Joe's comments, which I agree with, let me nitpick a couple things. The login button is a bit difficult to see, much like Joe's comment regarding the contrast in the footer. Maybe consider making that button a little more prominent?

    As for the hierarchy on the splash page, it seems a little out of place to have the header, some deep "buckets" for navigation and then have the reader get to small text that says "Welcome to Integrated Transportation." I'm not sure how important that section is to the client, but I wonder if it's possible to get that either in the header, or closer to the top without disrupting the great design you have.

    Once again, well done.

    • Octavio Corral
      Octavio Corral commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 2:23 PM

      I see your point.... hummm.......almost feels like an after thought. thanks for the feedback.

  • Alyo

    Alyo

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Bold headings

    Posted on Nov 07, 2009 at 1:25 PM

    From a viewer's perspective, the only thing i would change is the headings (specialy "we're focused on your success"). Try changing that if it would do any better.

    • Alyo
      Alyo commented:
      Posted: on Nov 07, 2009 at 1:30 PM

      Let me correct my self: the only thing I would add to the previus reviews, not the only thing I would change!

  • Michael Minter

    Michael Minter

    Rank: 3 Superior

    900

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes
    the contact information at the bottom

    Posted on Nov 07, 2009 at 8:14 PM

    As for trucking-company web sites - This is one of the best I've seen.

    All the content lines up very nicely, except for one area, which is the contact information portion of the page. Perhaps divide the head phone number more-so from the rest of the info?

    • Octavio Corral
      Octavio Corral commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 2:24 PM

      is the right alignment fine on the bottom contact info? or does that throw you off as well?

    • Michael Minter
      Michael Minter commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 2:34 PM

      Though it doesn't seem to line up perfectly with the rest of the content, the vertical-margin at the bottom of the page is okay, if only because you don't have the span accessible like at the top.

    • Octavio Corral
      Octavio Corral commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 2:49 PM

      what span at the top?

    • Michael Minter
      Michael Minter commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 3:32 PM

      I only mean that if you had that 100% blue backdrop (like top) then you could have your footer content spread evenly with the vertical alignment of the rest of the page.

      The space looks great as is though.

    • Octavio Corral
      Octavio Corral commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 4:19 PM

      ahhh I understand now

  • Corinne Ducusin

    Corinne Ducusin

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Nothing

    Posted on Nov 07, 2009 at 10:16 PM

    What you have here is a pretty simple and solid design. It's clean and you give all the elements room to breath with a lot of whitespace. To me, it's too much but I think it works because the content doesn't seem so "contained". Hope that makes sense!

    Ooh, good work incorporating that pattern in the header.

  • Kiran Kumar

    Kiran Kumar

    Rank: 3 Superior

    158

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    phone number text size

    Posted on Nov 09, 2009 at 12:15 AM

    clean and simple design, user friendly too.. is it possible to reduce the phone number size a 2points.

    ch33r5

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

    9919

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Works well

    Posted on Nov 09, 2009 at 7:58 AM

    The only thing I am not crazy about is the brown background. I would think about using a gray or something more neutral. Good work on this though, the rest work well.

    • Octavio Corral
      Octavio Corral commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 2:27 PM

      brown? ......err is your monitor calibrated? I'm not sure what everyone else sees.... but its supposed to be a dark orange.....haha yes "dark orange" is prob closer to brown but either way.... im not trying to go for brown.

      I'm worried about lightning the BG too much.

    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 2:44 PM

      HAHA, no it is more of a rust color. You know your on a designer site when someone corrects you on the shad of brown :). Your call, to me it's just a bit much.

    • Octavio Corral
      Octavio Corral commented:
      Posted: on Nov 09, 2009 at 4:06 PM

      haha. i feel like a gray would dull out the website. i really want to bg to have an orange feel so that it goes with the company colors

  • Jeff Wolff

    Jeff Wolff

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Work on the footer

    Posted on Nov 11, 2009 at 2:33 PM

    Add a subtle gradient. Spice it up a little.

  • Austin Pierce

    Austin Pierce

    Rank: 3 Superior

    221

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    Layout

    Posted on Nov 13, 2009 at 3:35 AM

    It looks like a Joomla template...?

    • Octavio Corral
      Octavio Corral commented:
      Posted: on Nov 13, 2009 at 3:51 AM

      care to elaborate or be more constructive/detailed in your critique?

  • Alpis Design

    Alpis Design

    Rank: 2 Titan

    144

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    too much space on the top

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 10:56 AM

    I think u can do something better on the top and I the logo looks too old for the website,I know sometime clients don't want to change it but u can try ;)

    • Octavio Corral
      Octavio Corral commented:
      Posted: on Nov 19, 2009 at 11:23 AM

      on the top where?

      and ya the logo is pretty bleh. I've already discussed it with them but they cant change it cause its everywhere already

    • Alpis Design
      Alpis Design commented:
      Posted: on Nov 19, 2009 at 11:29 AM

      I meant on the top where the logo and the menu are....

    • Octavio Corral
      Octavio Corral commented:
      Posted: on Nov 19, 2009 at 11:48 AM

      is the texture not pronounced enough? not sure what you're thinking

  • Fenson Jeremy

    Fenson Jeremy

    Rank: 1 Elite

    375

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    footer

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 4:18 PM

    I would try to give the footer a different color and create more contrast on the design. But make sure not to make it stand out more than the main content.

  • Kevin Wong

    Kevin Wong

    Rank: 4 Master

    26

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    What kind of success?

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 4:59 PM

    Do you sell trucked? I think the headline could be more specific to the type of success you're delivering.

    Why not allow people to login immediately on the homepage, similar to how UPS or Fedex allows for it?

  • Ali Kasimoglu

    Ali Kasimoglu

    Rank: 7 Student

    269

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    colors

    Posted on Dec 14, 2009 at 7:47 AM

    i dont like colors..