Yair Mor

Darkstage Studio website

By Yair Mor

   on Nov 04, 2009
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  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

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    can u make it little lighter

    Posted on Nov 04, 2009 at 11:48 PM

    this is really a good progress the only thing i feel the dark is too much i can't see properly your texture on the background..you can also align the text next to your logo with the contact section u are having below..

    • Yair Mor
      Yair Mor commented:
      Posted: on Nov 05, 2009 at 1:29 AM

      Actually it's really a matter of the brightness settings on your monitor. But I should make that a bit brighter. Thanks.

  • Miro

    Miro

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    it´s ready

    Posted on Nov 05, 2009 at 2:40 AM

    I wouldn´t change anything. Looks good.

  • Rajavel Ramasamy

    Rajavel Ramasamy

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    Night Mood

    Posted on Nov 05, 2009 at 5:25 AM

    The real estate can be used better, for example the space below the logo

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Getting there...

    Posted on Nov 05, 2009 at 8:01 AM

    This is a step in the right direction but there are still some things that could be improved. The navigation seems out of alignment. I would either move it inline with the content or make you content expand out further to meet the end of your navigation. The image also needs to line up with the edges. The red color is fairly hard to read on the black, consider lightening it up a bit. Overall, good direction, keep goin'.

  • Sassyx

    Sassyx

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    Menu alignment

    Posted on Nov 06, 2009 at 2:47 AM

    Like the direction this is headed in.