Logo Experiment - v2

just not feeling it....

there's a scribbly feel to the birds feet that i like, which is almost present in the tail.... but the beak and eye illustration are more like a standard line art style, which doesn't do it for me. plus the eye looks blank, like the bird is in a trance...

Try to simplify the bird, modify it like it was painted with a couple on brush strokes.

you can try by removing the grey box from top image

The bird needs to be less detailed and one color. Use the charcoal color that you used for the background of "blackbirddesign". You also need to somehow tie the bird into the logo more. This looks a bit like you pulled some template art off the web and tied some verbiage to it. Good idea behind the concept just tighten up the details.

Like the colour scheme of the first one.

Agree with most that the bird would be better simplified making it into more of an emblem/icon.

I would definitely keep it to those few colours too.

The font is nice, but the bird doesn't work for me as a logo. It also might not scale well.

The bird looks like a clipart image with some text below.. perhaps make it more abstract like in just the shape of the bird in black only

All I see is a bird and a text. The whole concept lacks in personality. If it is about web design, simplify the drawing, use dark grey instead of black, find a more rounded type.

Start it all over again. Be patient, your logo as a webdesigner must be perfect, and if you are good, it will take a long time until you get something that pleases you.

Take care