Janel Crisp

New website design

By Janel Crisp

   on Nov 02, 2009
8 Reviews1 Vote0 Favorites213 Views

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  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
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    Oh wow!

    Posted on Nov 02, 2009 at 4:20 PM

    This looks so good! Only two little things come to my mind: aligning the "McKenzie-text" with the "baby authority" and moving the search right, next to the "view cart". Good work!

  • pierre foucher

    pierre foucher

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    Logo

    Posted on Nov 02, 2009 at 5:40 PM

    Does not look very baby focused. More like a fashion website. Also, quite hard to see that it is an ecommerce site at first glance.

  • Codedude

    Codedude

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    • Design: 4
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    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    the main navigation

    Posted on Nov 02, 2009 at 7:18 PM

    I really like this site overall. However, I the navigation is sort of lost in the site. I would make it stand out a litttle more by adding a background possibly.

  • Christoph Brueckner

    Christoph Brueckner

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
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    really good work

    Posted on Nov 02, 2009 at 8:37 PM

    If I could change one thing, I would make the words "baby authority" smaller since I think there is too little whitespace between those words and its parentheses

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    menu bar is getting lost

    Posted on Nov 03, 2009 at 5:34 AM

    i feel your menu bar is somehow getting lost as rest is having many things..so if you can play around a little bit with ur manu bar..might take the bottom from below of the mainimage to the top bar and then writing the text with white..

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
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    Nice design...

    Posted on Nov 03, 2009 at 7:25 AM

    The search bar/contact/cart all look a bit out of place. I would try and rearrange them to look more purposeful. The rest of the site is very nice. You have a good eye for design and layout, good work!

  • Jorrie Neverland

    Jorrie Neverland

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 1
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    • Engagement: 1
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    Dont like the logo to simple

    Posted on Nov 03, 2009 at 8:36 AM

    The font on the left is not matching with the font below? I coul make it smaller... like 950px and center on page, use blueprint css its very good.

    The navigation feels to simple for me, perhaps make it graphical images like you see on wired.com, I would add an Cart image to the view cart and I miss a customer support link in the top menu on the right

    Seach should not be in the middle i think, better place it right in the menu bar on the same height as the menu items. This is possible if you have smaller sized "brands" "furniture" based on my wired.com suggestion above. Good luck :)

  • Sassyx

    Sassyx

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
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    Ditto on Miro's review

    Posted on Nov 06, 2009 at 2:30 AM

    Love the layout and believe only minor modifications needed. Looks good.