Design looks really good. I might try and pull that pink color in other places of the design. The highlight behind the nav might work better as a circular gradient. Lastly, thinking about grounding this design better with some sort of horizon line creating your "floor" that the packaging rest on. Good work so far though, I like it!
People will never read that much descriptive text. I'd shorten it up, or somehow make it more interesting typographically. Perhaps make the main image a little larger too and shorten up that line length.
The logo looks a little generic web2.0 to me, with the reversed out "Pack", like LinkedIn. I'm not sure that's doing anything for the logo.
The product images on the bottom are nice, I could see them moving up right front an center.
Yes, you're right! I'll try to do something with this txt.
Thanks for useful tips! :)
There isnt much going on, but if that is what you are looking for that it does that. Not a fan of the logo, or the box picture on the left...
Not much to change. Maybe I would try to make a light gradient on the background.
Looks professional. Very clear as what what everything is and where I can go.
Overall it's kinda unengaging, might try adding color or developing typography.
There's a lot of text in that opening paragraph, too.
This looks good, but first thing I would play with is the gradient. I know you are going for sort of a navigation background with that white gradient yet I might try splashing some gradient in the body area too.
Generally pretty great design. I would however agree with most of the other comments.
I would keep the gradient behind the navigation but make it much more subtle.
A bit of work on the typography would add to it also - I'd justify the paragraph text, and make the heading larger.
its all good but it seem kinda empty
may be u can try to fit 2 images on the left or one image that express something
or may be u can make the 3 in the bottom far away a lil bit
hope this helps
just make the gradient lil bit lighter and the middle one in the bottom 3 a lil bit smaller to be in flow with others
i am always fond of nice and clean look and this is not exception....
Wouldn't change anything. Good job.
Thank you! Good idea with that floor! I will go for it. :)