Szymon Niemczura

Cosmetics Packaging Company Website

By Szymon Niemczura

   on Oct 29, 2009
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  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    CF Verified professional

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    Light and elegant - Yes.

    Posted on Oct 29, 2009 at 10:37 AM

    Design looks really good. I might try and pull that pink color in other places of the design. The highlight behind the nav might work better as a circular gradient. Lastly, thinking about grounding this design better with some sort of horizon line creating your "floor" that the packaging rest on. Good work so far though, I like it!

  • Chris Coyier

    Chris Coyier

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    Too much type for homepage

    Posted on Oct 31, 2009 at 4:46 PM

    People will never read that much descriptive text. I'd shorten it up, or somehow make it more interesting typographically. Perhaps make the main image a little larger too and shorten up that line length.

    The logo looks a little generic web2.0 to me, with the reversed out "Pack", like LinkedIn. I'm not sure that's doing anything for the logo.

    The product images on the bottom are nice, I could see them moving up right front an center.

    • Szymon Niemczura
      Szymon Niemczura commented:
      Posted: on Oct 31, 2009 at 6:05 PM

      Yes, you're right! I'll try to do something with this txt.

      Thanks for useful tips! :)

  • Mike Madison

    Mike Madison

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    1 Vote
    Its descent

    Posted on Oct 31, 2009 at 9:31 PM

    There isnt much going on, but if that is what you are looking for that it does that. Not a fan of the logo, or the box picture on the left...

  • Miro

    Miro

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    looks very good

    Posted on Oct 29, 2009 at 10:46 AM

    Not much to change. Maybe I would try to make a light gradient on the background.

  • Ted Goas

    Ted Goas

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    Clean, Clear, Unengaging

    Posted on Oct 29, 2009 at 10:56 AM

    Looks professional. Very clear as what what everything is and where I can go.

    Overall it's kinda unengaging, might try adding color or developing typography.

    There's a lot of text in that opening paragraph, too.

  • Mr Schwabe

    Mr Schwabe

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    1 Vote
    More gradient

    Posted on Oct 29, 2009 at 5:29 PM

    This looks good, but first thing I would play with is the gradient. I know you are going for sort of a navigation background with that white gradient yet I might try splashing some gradient in the body area too.

  • Ben Walker

    Ben Walker

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    1 Vote
    Subtler gradient

    Posted on Oct 30, 2009 at 7:13 AM

    Generally pretty great design. I would however agree with most of the other comments.

    I would keep the gradient behind the navigation but make it much more subtle.

    A bit of work on the typography would add to it also - I'd justify the paragraph text, and make the heading larger.

  • Amr Mohsen

    Amr Mohsen

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    1 Vote
    kinda empty

    Posted on Oct 31, 2009 at 3:14 AM

    its all good but it seem kinda empty

    may be u can try to fit 2 images on the left or one image that express something

    or may be u can make the 3 in the bottom far away a lil bit

    hope this helps

    • Szymon Niemczura
      Szymon Niemczura commented:
      Posted: on Oct 31, 2009 at 11:15 AM

      Thanks! I uploaded new wersion :)

    • Amr Mohsen
      Amr Mohsen commented:
      Posted: on Oct 31, 2009 at 11:20 AM

      just make the gradient lil bit lighter and the middle one in the bottom 3 a lil bit smaller to be in flow with others

    • Szymon Niemczura
      Szymon Niemczura commented:
      Posted: on Oct 31, 2009 at 11:49 AM

      Updated - what you think?

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

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    dude nice and clean love it..

    Posted on Nov 05, 2009 at 6:24 AM

    i am always fond of nice and clean look and this is not exception....

  • Joe Aeppli

    Joe Aeppli

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    Nice and Clean

    Posted on Nov 06, 2009 at 11:05 AM

    Wouldn't change anything. Good job.