Concept Reviews
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change anything I love this look it's clean sharp and modern excellently executed well done!
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chris faulkner commented:Thanks a lot for the kind words Miro and Aaran! I went through so many different versions. making a site for myself has been the most challenging site i've made so far. never would have thought.
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the only think bit concerned is the blue u have used can u toned down that bit it's striking to the eyes at the moment..rest is good..
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chris faulkner commented:
ah the blue. that blue has grown on me too much for me to change it, although i do see how someone might think it's a bit drastic. i think if i made it any lighter or darker it would take away from it. I appreciate the feedback though.
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I love it.
Menu is unique, and something a little different.
Only thing i would change is the colour of the footer needs toned down a little(although i love it) and maybe make the portfolio pictures a little larger, but i can see what you have done with alignment on that.
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chris faulkner commented:
yea i have a couple of lighter versions of that footer, might try and see what people think about that. and yea i had to think about the portfolio pictures, because i didn't want them too small but like you said, the alignment is an issue there. Thanks for the feedback.
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There is very little I would change on this design, it looks really good. Great organization and clean crisp lines. I like the concept behind everything with being thirsty and the water on the footer. Really well thought out, GREAT job!
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hey, your site looks very cool and it directly conveying your service. Call to actions are very well placed but i didnt like the jquery carousel placement and size
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Generally very good.
Personally I would do something to separate the header (the logo and menu).
I would move the twitter, etc links elsewhere - it's a bit unclear what these are for.
A bit more spacing between the intro paragraph and the intro paragraph and the 3 content buckets would help.
I'd make the portfolio item straight, not wonky. Make more of your work - bigger pictures, show it off!
Hope that's helpful to you!
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Chris, you've got a great site! I really love it and I believe it works well with the clients.
There's one small detail about that list "Design, Develop, Guidance" - I don't quite like the shadow on icons and I believe you could make the list more attractive by changing that squared LIs with a nice tick or something...
Anyway good job! Take care!
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chris faulkner commented:
Hi Szymon. When you say "shadow" for the icons do you mean the shading inside them? I agree with you on the LI lists... I've been meaning to give some other type of bullets a try. Thanks for the help.
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Beautiful design. I love the adequate use of whitespace where needed.
Just on thing. The text at the bottom is not easily readable. Perhaps try to make the background a little darker to increase contrast.
Good work!
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I would say theres to much type and not enough portfolio pieces
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You have nailed it!
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Hi, I like it. If I should poke on anything it might be the main menu, I dont feel its the same style if you know what I mean.
The bottom also feel a little heavy, but that might work better when its in html.
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The only thing I would change is the topmost texture line. Not that I have a better idea for those social media icons right now, but I think you could maybe do something that would fit the water theme better.
Apart from that, it's great work. Envying your logo a lot ;-)
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Heeeyy. I remember this logo. I like how the logo turned out, and I really like your site design, Chris. You know, at first glance, I thought it was a brochure.
I have two simple questions: 1. The site is very modular and linear. Do you want the "Portfolio" icon on the right to be angled? 2. Is Web Thirsty one word or two? Your logo appears to make it two words, but your site content shows it as one word. Personally, I'd go with two words because I think that matches your logo better.
Great job, Chris.
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Josh Jackson commented:I have to follow up my own comment with this ... grammatically speaking, you need to tweak your intro for parallelism. If you want to say "is creating clean ..." then you should say "providing clients with ... " Otherwise, it should be "to create clean ..." and "to provide clients ..." I think this will help eliminate that widow, too. Oh, and no comma is needed after "usability."
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I wouldn't change much. You've create a nice, consistent look. Maybe work on the icons up top and the three across the middle, but that's nitpicking!
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BEAUTIFUL indeed. Very clean and usable. Great work.
The only think I'd change is the footer does not tile on larger screens. On my 24" there is white space on either side.
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chris faulkner commented:
Thanks a lot Joel for bringing that to my attention. I'm using 20'' screens so I didn't catch it.
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I think the structure isn't clear enough due to the size resemblance of the logotype and the title.
One way to go is to slightly reduce the logo size and keep it as tall as the navigation bar, this way you can leave some room and differentiate both areas. I'd also add more space between the title description and the bottom columns.
I like the color palette and the three columns make the site very clean.
Hope it helps!
