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I would make the umbrella less detailed. I like the concept and choice of font type though. Keep workin' on this, you have a good direction.
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Nate Hamilton commented:I would get rid of the bow/eyes on top of the umbrella. Simplify the handle to being just solid black and thin it out. After that, I think you might have a winner here.
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I would suggest that you work on the umbrella. Try and make the art more suggestive rather than literal. Using less detail is a good place to start.
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Ethlen Rain commented:
By 'suggestive rather than literal' I'm guessing you mean to make something look like the umbrella rather than an actual one? If that's what you meant, then I was thinking I could use a flower as the umbrella head or a toadstool, or leaving the umbrella part out and just having the ribbon as the umbrella if you know what I mean.
Shoot me if someone's already come up with that T_T I imagine its very likely. But thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
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I think the umbrella looks clip-arty too. I doesn't remind me of victorian parasols (fancy umbrellas).
Also, when i think of fairytale and victorian, I think of overly ornate decorations, like flower motifs and lace. Not that you would want a hyper detailed icon for a logo, but it seems like it needs some more whimsy.
Of these, I prefer the first one, for its proportions. I would keep sketching umbrellas in different orientations to see what kind of variations you can come up with that are more interesting.
Check out this google image search for inspiration: http://tiny.cc/cYm8j
PS - I think the font choice could work - it has a fanciful quality to it while still being modern.
Thanks so much for your review. A few reviews have popped up, saying 'umbrella less detailed.' Do you think you can please elaborate a bit? Because I swear I've made the umbrella as simple as I thought possible, if the shape changes more it would probably look like half a lollipop.
Aaa don't worry, I will keep working on this. Designing logos is way harder than I thought!