Gustavo Leite

Logo for my own ad firm (lemon milk)

By Gustavo Leite

   on Oct 27, 2009
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  • Steven diebold

    Steven diebold

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    brand personality

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 1:23 PM

    I think you need a brand strategy before you make design decisions. Is this a beverage drink?

    what category is this in? why is it fun and creative? what does that do to carry the brand strategy?

    what is the brand personality you're after besides creative and fun?

    • Gustavo Leite
      Gustavo Leite commented:
      Posted: on Oct 28, 2009 at 11:47 AM

      Hey, I've posted a second version of this same concept, Id like to hear your thoughts.

  • Vitor Marques

    Vitor Marques

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    hum...

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 1:32 PM

    I like this design. I look at name and logo and understand it in no time! and for me it was easier since i'm portuguese hehe.

    Oh.. I like the typo too =) good work!

  • Kate Dawson

    Kate Dawson

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
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    try a new text color

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 1:42 PM

    I don't really like the gray text.

    I like the lemon icon - nice shape, very recognizeable. Because of the color, I thought it was an orange rather than a lemon.

    I prefer the text to the right of the icon, but I would enlarge the icon so it is the same height as the words. Also, maybe consider tilting the icon slightly, to make it more dynamic. Just an idea.

  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    nothing

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 2:15 PM

    I would change nothing, I like this!

    • Gustavo Leite
      Gustavo Leite commented:
      Posted: on Oct 28, 2009 at 11:47 AM

      Hey, I've posted a second version of this same concept, Id like to hear your thoughts.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    What is that?

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 2:26 PM

    I like the looks of the object but i find that I can't get over not knowing what it is. It is clearly suppose to be something, what, I don't know. I would make it more clear what the object is exactly. Love the colors and the typography, just improve on the object.

    • Gustavo Leite
      Gustavo Leite commented:
      Posted: on Oct 27, 2009 at 4:23 PM

      Maybe its not so obvious to you because you its a different language but Leite means Milk, and Lime means lemon. Thanks for the comment

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
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    This is very...

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 4:21 PM

    clever don't change anything it took a few seconds to register... but it looks great!

  • Ethlen Rain

    Ethlen Rain

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 3
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    Colour

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 5:17 PM

    I thought it was an orange! It definitely needs to be yellow (I suppose you could gather that from the name, but if you had the symbol by itself for any reason, then it matters)

    The grey text makes it also look a bit bland.

    I think putting the symbol in the middle of the name makes it hard to read. It creates a pause between the words, therefore it takes longer to read/understand. Like one other the other reviews said, it would probably look better to the far left or right.

    • Gustavo Leite
      Gustavo Leite commented:
      Posted: on Oct 28, 2009 at 11:47 AM

      Hey, I've posted a second version of this same concept, Id like to hear your thoughts.

  • Kiran Kumar

    Kiran Kumar

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    the object

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 9:29 PM

    needs some more clarity, show some other angles of gradient. typo needs more strong color.

    ch33r5

    • Gustavo Leite
      Gustavo Leite commented:
      Posted: on Oct 28, 2009 at 11:47 AM

      Hey, I've posted a second version of this same concept, Id like to hear your thoughts.

    • Raashid Kazi
      Raashid Kazi commented:
      Posted: on Nov 11, 2009 at 6:36 AM

      hey

      quite unique, fresh have seen something similar... freshly squeezed design