Here are a few points to consider:
Good luck!
is not OK. taking pictures of small things is not trivial. You need a better image or a better production. The design looks confusing, it's not easy to read and the colors are not OK.
looks like you must work more on these concepts. You may find some inspiration checking some other electronic music festival posters.
maybe, you can explore other ways, such as vintage futurism art for example, because it's fun and a music festival is not about technology, but about people having fun.
needs more work, friend.
I give high marks to concept and fulfilling the purpose. The design, however, is weak to me.
Main challenge is the elements don't know who's in the spotlight, don't back each other up, support or contrast...
I agree w/comment that the photo of little guy needs to be awesome - that could take center stage more with a more artistic handling (and better image). If the guy's still around could you give him an "instrument"? What about several of these guys at varying focus representing a band?
Smudge and dirty the schematic somehow, as if on manual or paper.
Great concept - great potential.
I would try with a picture taken from a lower angle, now this little guy looks very...little. Make him a giant! After you have a good picture, start adding texts etc.
I agree. Make the electroguy BIG. Perhaps add some kind of motion blur to give it a bit of dynamics. Make him dance.
I like the design, it really has an electronical feeling.. :)
But I must agree that the photo of our little guy here is a bit to poor. It needs more contrast and saturation. it's too dark and the details in all elements are difficult to see. For me it also looks a bit 'blury'. If you can catch the edges a bit more, lighten it up and a whiter background it would help a lot.. :)
keep up the good work!
i really like the little creature you have created, but seeing as everything else on the poster is very graphic i think you need to take the photograph and perhaps draw it up on the computer. or at least place with its definition (its slightly blurred) and saturation etc
I think the main problem with this concept is the chosen picture. I would choose something a little more exciting and artistic. I would also get rid of the blue color, it sticks out far too much. I like everything else, I think your onto something. Typography is cool and makes me want to read it. The only other things you might want to add is details on how to get there, when, where sort of details. Good work.
thanks for the imput ) but.. i cant change the pic, it was a requierment of the poster... ill keep trying thanks )
thnx)