Romy Haik

Logo for my company - Dax Design V2

By Romy Haik

   on Oct 24, 2009
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  • Yang Tao

    Yang Tao

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    More deatiled

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 5:04 PM

    The image should have something that is related to the company like a text somewhere that displays the design site. A bird could be for anything

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Oct 24, 2009 at 10:33 PM

      I see it as a good symbol itself. It is very hummingbird like and hummingbird is a precise flyer as Romy is precise with his pen. And the beak is the pen.

  • Metin Ucar

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    good

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 8:18 PM

    really good work. I like it. yet, i'll make a comment on a detail. if you could the connection of bird's neck and back head smoother, it'd be much better. as it is now, the connection seems to be quite sharp.

  • Rasheed Sulaiman

    Rasheed Sulaiman

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    I would add a splash of 1 more color into the design

    Posted on Oct 29, 2009 at 12:16 PM

    I think the bird is very clean. Nice illustration. I Like :)

  • juri markelovs

    juri markelovs

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    porpose

    Posted on Oct 29, 2009 at 11:08 PM

    I would never guess what is the propose of logo

  • Caroline Hill

    Caroline Hill

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    well done

    Posted on Oct 30, 2009 at 7:55 AM

    i really like it, wouldnt change a thing

  • Shadus S

    Shadus S

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    Shape

    Posted on Oct 31, 2009 at 12:14 PM

    The one before this looked more like a hummingbird, so this is definitely an improvement. It looks more like a dove now. I like the colors you picked, and the gradient blues.

    The only thing i would change would be to make his beak a little less pointy. It's almost like a woodpecker beak. Other than that it looks great.

  • Paul Tamaro

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    I think the beak may be a little too long?

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 10:20 PM

    It definitely caught my eye, and it's memorable -- very important for a logo -- it also looks good at the smaller size.

    It seems like there is just a little too much detail though? I would make the neck a little thicker, and raise the front wing just a bit at the shoulder -- it seems like the proportion is a little off in comparison to the lower portion of the back just above the tail.

    Good work...

  • Swarat Ghosh

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    this is much better and sharper !!

    Posted on Oct 25, 2009 at 7:19 AM

    g8 work keep it up....!!

  • jorrie neverland

    jorrie neverland

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    nice but would smooth the lines

    Posted on Oct 25, 2009 at 9:27 AM

    I would smooth the lines like you see in flash drawings and get it a bit more web 2.0 feel.. perhaps very little bleu gradiant in the white body areas

  • dawn

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    Looks nice and clean, but maybe take a look at the papyrus logo and make sure it doesn't get too similar.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Great colors, Great imagery, Great Direiction

    Posted on Oct 26, 2009 at 8:40 AM

    I like this imagery quite a bit. Your colors also work really well together. I'm guessing that you are still working on this and are concentrating on the imagery. I'd like to see how you pair this with the company name. Good start though!

  • Jennifer Norton

    Jennifer Norton

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    Looks Great

    Posted on Oct 26, 2009 at 1:01 PM

    Great job. It's very memorable. Simple and classy. The blue accenting really makes it stand out.

  • mascha van tongeren

    mascha van tongeren

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    color

    Posted on Oct 26, 2009 at 3:26 PM

    I really like the design of the hummingbird ... I just wouldn't go for that color blue for obvious reasons [ twitter] .

  • Amr Mohsen

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    illustration

    Posted on Oct 26, 2009 at 9:20 PM

    i gotta say the colors is beautiful that what me open this concept but the trace is not so well see the neck and head curve are bad , it look kinda nice over all but those kinda tiny hard edged curves drives me crazy and when someone see it he will feel there is something just work on the neck curve , but nice idea nice feather may be decrease the bright in the gradient a lil bit and good luck !

  • Joey Senatore

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    Looks like Twitter

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 8:50 AM

    Too close to twitter or a wedding invitation

  • Gemma Reidy

    Gemma Reidy

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    colours

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 10:35 AM

    I actually think this bird looks a bit lifeless in blue, sorry! Hummingbirds are beautiful and exotic, and although you dont necessarily need to reflect that, I think perhaps warmer and brighter colours would work better for this, especially as their are only small amounts of colour involved on the wings etc. Also I do think that the head/neck needs some work, also just where the belly meets the tail, could be a bit smoother. overall though I think it's a nice design!

  • Gport

    Gport

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    Better explanation of the logo

    Posted on Oct 28, 2009 at 7:18 AM

    I think its a good logo, but I would like to know what the background story is.

    Also I think the line at the back of the birds head that continues into the neck is not a "fluid" line.

    But nonetheless a very good logo!

  • MATTHEW SIMONS

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    Great icon. draws attention.

  • Lisa Noble

    Lisa Noble

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    I like it.

    Posted on Oct 28, 2009 at 4:02 PM

    It looks really nice.

  • Miro

    Miro

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    This is better

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 4:22 PM

    The first one was good but you are right, this is even better. For the reasons you already mentioned.

  • Imran Mulla

    Imran Mulla

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    color combination

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 10:23 PM

    should be another colors but nice illustration..