Swarat Ghosh

website mock for cracked media

By Swarat Ghosh

   on Oct 24, 2009
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  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    • Design: 4
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    • Originality: 4
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    Pencil shadow or size to computer.

    Posted on Oct 25, 2009 at 7:11 PM

    Hi Swarat,

    This looks a lot better than previous versions. The only thing left (as mentioned) would be the pencil to the computer relation. If you want the pencil to stay bigger than the computer, than that means it is closer to us than the other items and in turn would need a shadow somehow, so we understand that visually.

    Don't give up, it's almost there.

    :0)

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    I'd say you're pretty close to finished here.

    Posted on Oct 26, 2009 at 8:51 AM

    Good work, I like what you have done here. The content is easily readable and definitely takes front stage!

  • Romy Haik

    Romy Haik

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    The main paper, and navigation

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 9:08 AM

    I really liked this one, though something does bug me. If you see, the website itself looks a bit messy, which is nice and all, but the page itself, where everything is written on, is a non-deffected paper. It's very straight, and the texture you gave it doesnt match it. I would add a few rips to the paper, to make it all match together. Maybe make the navigation text, a little larger. 2 pixels would be fine. Hope I helped, this is a really good work, I just think these final touches would make it perfect.

  • Miro

    Miro

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    menu size

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 9:27 AM

    Getting better and better, this looks good too. Only, as Romy said, make the menu font a little larger.

    • Swarat Ghosh
      Swarat Ghosh commented:
      Posted: on Oct 24, 2009 at 9:31 AM

      thanks hopefully i will make it sooner...waiting for more feedbacks and votes :)

  • Joe Stevens

    Joe Stevens

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    • Design: 4
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    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
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    The Services Section

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 9:41 AM

    I like the concept of this design a great deal, looks very natural. The only thing that bugs me a bit is the Services Checklist, I don't think it stands out enough. You need something to section it off, like a line or something.

  • Ben Eradhun

    Ben Eradhun

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    good design

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 10:07 AM

    but perhaps a bit too cluttering, too much elements scattered in there

  • Maris Bunkovskis

    Maris Bunkovskis

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    Size of some objects feels off...

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 11:31 AM

    I like this design very much, definately much better than at the beginning.

    The thing i dont like - scale of some objects on the table is off, if you use items from real world and place them on a table, then u should keep the size relations, it fels kinda weird when a pencil is much bigger than a laptop and stuff. but thats justs my opinion :)

  • Jonas Myrhaug

    Jonas Myrhaug

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
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    Color

    Posted on Oct 25, 2009 at 4:56 PM

    That was realy nice work :o Good work with the design, I cant say I want to see any change on that, go on :)